Comment from Ronni

Excellent

What an imagination trip this is! So loving and
enchanting it just literally makes one sigh.
Simply conveyed, yet so elegant of a love treasured.
Gorgeous writing here.

 Comment Written 25-May-2009

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reply by the author on 25-May-2009

One of my favorite fans and reviewer strikes again :) Thank you so much for your insightful way of reviewing I am glad this touched you again.
Larry

Comment from Rottie

Excellent

Good rhyming, easy flow to each verse, good beat and emits a comfort. The structure and presentation were excellent. The overall poem was was warm and inviting, nice love poem!

 Comment Written 20-May-2009

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reply by the author on 20-May-2009

Thank you so much for your kinds words, I am so glad that this poem touched you this way.
You may enjoy some of my other romantic poems as well, if you care to check out my portfolio, it is up to you. Take care.
Larry

Comment from creativewriterUK

Excellent

Well Larry, I never cease o be amazed at what you write in your poems. This is a great piece of work. It flows well, it gives a beautiful sentiment to the one you love, and tells a lovely story of devotion. The rhyme is perfect and I love the picture you have chosen for it. Great piece as always. Keith.

 Comment Written 20-May-2009

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reply by the author on 20-May-2009

Again I thank you for your review. As mentinoed before some of these are older poems that have been on paper and on my harddives for a few years. It is getting close to me really working on a lot of new ones. And this is the place to do it up here. Because of all the reviews it certainly does help to get a person inspired to write more. Take care.
Larry

reply by creativewriterUK on 21-May-2009

Hi Larry, No problem, you are welcome to the review anytime. Just keep up the good work and start to write more of the same... Keith.

Comment from Joyce L.

Excellent

This poem was a joy to read. I could feel the love just spring out and grasp the world around this man and woman. From whatever web site you got this picture, it is just beautiful and brings an extra tenderness to the poem. It just adds to the already fine poem, so together they work as one.

Joyce

 Comment Written 20-May-2009

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reply by the author on 20-May-2009

Thank you so much I am so glad you like it. You may be interested in some of my other works of romantic poetry as well, If you care to check out my portfolio you are most welcome to do so. Take care.
Larry