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The Baby Rash Cure

jingle contest entry

19 total reviews 
Comment from jaynugget24
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I loved your commercial it is so cute, it is catchy and appropriate for tv and radio. Also your background is on target.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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Comment from whizpurr ^-^
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Hi Fayesh,
Enjoyed your jaunty jingle jangle. That 4th line is so clever! If this was for a real Doctor Smoothie's contest, they just might pick yours because it is short, sweet, clear and catchy. Well done.
Cheers,
Whizpurr ^-^

 Comment Written 30-May-2009

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Comment from kowen714
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I like this. It;s short, sweet and to the point. I follows all the guidlines and is descriptive the way a jingle should be. Great job! good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 30-May-2009

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    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from becky7777
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very very catchy it would work great as a jingle. as I have been reading these entries there has been some long ones that wont work for a tv or radio time limit. you have it right. good luck in the contest.
Becky

 Comment Written 30-May-2009

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Comment from pilarblue
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Ahhh, this is very cute!! You did an excellent job and I could definitely hear the Itsy Bitsy Spider tune in it. Great job. :D -Pilar

 Comment Written 30-May-2009

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Comment from mmichelle97219
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It is so cute and it adheres to all the contest rules well. I liked it much, and wish you the best of luck in the voting booth.
Michelle

 Comment Written 30-May-2009

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    Thank you for the encouraging review and this fun contest.
Comment from skye
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Now I am sold on this product, because the ad is so cute.
The pictures are also cute,which helps sell the item.
Your jingle coaxes the new mother to buy the best for her infant.
Well done.

 Comment Written 29-May-2009

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Comment from anabelle
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Very funny, and quite catchy jingle. You're very creative and I especially liked the 'wipe the burning out'.

Well done, and good luck.

Regards, anabelle

 Comment Written 29-May-2009

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Comment from Justin Chopin
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Great job with the jingle. Great job with everything. I think they actually do have a Boudreaux's butt paste I don't think that's for baby's though. Great idea especially is your baby has a rash. Excellent job with everything.

 Comment Written 27-May-2009

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Comment from stormwolf2
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Cute and funny, I was singling it out loud and got a strange look from my pooch!
I thought this was great fun! It just flows off the tongue.

Good luck and best wishes,
Malcolm

 Comment Written 27-May-2009

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    Thank you for the encouraging review.