Comment from creativewriterUK

Excellent

Yet another great poem of love. It flows well and the rhyme works just right. Be sure to give your book some thought. Great poem... Keith.

 Comment Written 16-May-2009

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reply by the author on 16-May-2009

It is amazing how poems see new life at some point. This is one of the ones I had wrote a few years back along with others ones you have read and now they find new life up here all over again. :-) Take care
Larry

reply by creativewriterUK on 17-May-2009

Hi Larry, sometimes when we look back at our previous work, we wonder if it was us that really wrote it, I find that also when I look at what I did years ago. Keep them coming... Keith.

Comment from words

Excellent

Nice romantic verse.

Esepcially liked the closing stanza:
So darling except this rose,
may it live long within your heart
and believe our love will strengthen,
even when were far apart.

 Comment Written 15-May-2009

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reply by the author on 15-May-2009

Thank you so much I am glad that it touched you the way that it did, Take care.
Larry

Comment from Darren Crozier

Excellent

i was just sat here revieing some work with my friends ( well were actually drinking) lol so we are alot harder to impress, .congratulations on a very sweet poem ;).............From daz

 Comment Written 15-May-2009

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reply by the author on 15-May-2009

I hope the poem will be just as sweet when the alcohol wears off. LOL Anyway thank you for a very nice review.
Larry

reply by Darren Crozier on 15-May-2009

hey feal good lol, were having what is known as a 'vodka friday round mine, and i quickly nipped on to check the ratings for my latest poem and clocked yours, and everyone loved it! men and women alike ! so its happy days, cuz if you can win over a room full of drunken people with seriously loud music, you know your doin ace!!!!!!!!!! :)

Anyway im goinna get back to it now, but if you get chance have a look at my newest post, its doing really well, completly oposite styles we have, but i hope you like it anyway, enjoy your night :).your buddy daz

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

your all I 'm thinking of. >you're
Picture and words go hand in hand in this verse. I have found nothing but that one small item to suggest for this piece.This was just a delight for me to have read and reviewed... John

 Comment Written 15-May-2009

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reply by the author on 15-May-2009

Thank you for kind words and I will go make that change. I am so glad you liked it.
Larry