Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I did enjoy this very much, it would be great to read a book on such romance, in poetry form, great artwork (cover) an excellent love (romance) poem, very well written and presented ****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019

Thanks again kahpot for your great review. This poem and the other romantic poem I revived are two of the many going into my book of romantic poetry coming out in the near future. Take Care.
Larry

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

A good romance poem - well spoken to one who's loved. Glad that you're doing a book of these. I'm not one for stating romantic feelings - I'm more down to earth and unspoken. But this is a good job.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Thanks Gail I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the generous 5 stars as well. Take care.
Larry

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This excellent, romantic poem makes appealing use of rhyme and meter
and of vivid, specific descriptions to create a lovely scene of marital bliss.
Red-hot artwork!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Thank Janice for your review of my poem, I am so glad you like it so much. It is one that will be in my romantic book of poetry coming out in the near future. Take care.
Larry

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Exceptional

Oooh Yeess! Was it as Good for You as it Was in this POEM! Awesome rhyme. Beautifully Romantic Eloquently Expressed Poetry in Rhythm, Momentum and Rhyme! Loved it. Loved it. Loved it! The artwork is the perfect icing on this poetry cake! BRAVO!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Wow Brenda Thanks you so much, I got a feeling you loved it allot. Thank you for the generous 6 stars, hopefully my book on romantic poetry will be out in about a week and this one will be in it. Take care.
Larry

reply by Brenda Henderson on 23-Jul-2019

If the others are all like that they'll make perfect Christmas, Anniversary and Valentine's Day presents! Good luck! I'm sure you won't need it though!

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Thanks I will add you as a buddy up here and let you know when it is available if you are interested.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 23-Jul-2019

Thank you!

reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Welcome

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A sensually beautiful offering that touches on the passion between the two without crossing over into unnecessary descriptions...you have a wonderful grace to the words/phrases that allow the reader to drift and daydream while only creating the framework for that which the individual mind prefers to fill in.... great job! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and good luck with your books! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Thank you so much for your review. On my romantic poetry I try to never cross the line at all, there really is no need for it at all. Thanks for the generous 5 stars. Take care.
Larry

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written romantic love poem about the promises and vows we make to our special partner for life. I could not find any grammatical mistakes, I enjoyed your poem of romance.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019

Thanks Sandra I am so glad you enjoyed it. Your review is much appreciated for sure. Take care.
Larry

Comment from Pacinogal

Excellent

BRAVO!!!!!

I see what you mean Larry about getting close

enough for the reader to really enjoy but not go overboard.

I loved the last stanza of this poem. Who wouldn't want

that? MMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Warmly, Kathy

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Yes I think it is very important to not cross that line, not to say I did not do a little bit of it in the past but the good Lord did not give me a talent for writing poetry just to write a bunch of filthy things. Sex is not bad, the good Lord made sex and gaves us desires, but to have desires for certain people that are meant to be together and share their life and love with.
I enjoy writing Romantic Poetry I just want to keep it in good context. Glad you loved it alot please read more of my work. Take care and be good.
Larry

reply by Pacinogal on 24-May-2009

You're welcome.

I've got to catch up on all I missed while being away, ill.

Kathy

Comment from creativewriterUK

Excellent

Hi Larry, A great piece of work, it flows well and a beautiful tribute to the one you love. It could almost be for any loving couple. I like the rhyming system, it works very well. Keep up the good work...
Keith.

 Comment Written 15-May-2009

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reply by the author on 15-May-2009

Thanks again, I really do enjoy your reviews, they mean alot.
Larry

reply by creativewriterUK on 15-May-2009

No problem Larry, your poems say a lot too... Keith.

reply by creativewriterUK on 16-May-2009

You are welcome as always... Keith.

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

A most enchanting and delightfully romantic love poem;
revealing a warmth and kind of troth that is truly
profound and heart stirring! The way you describe
your love here; all her glowing beauty and co-mingling
of mutual desires and passions is just simply wondrous!
Who would not envy a love like this, and the one adoring
her capturing both hearst desires and dreams so
magnificently. Splendid poem, lovel to read. The flow
was very harmonious and rhythymic throughout.

 Comment Written 14-May-2009

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reply by the author on 14-May-2009

Thank you so much for this very stiring review. I can not say I have ever had anybody sound so passionate in a review before. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
This is one of my somewhat stronger romantic poems. I write alot of Romantic poetry and Christian Postry as well. I try and be careful not to cross the line into erotica.

I am fairly new here within the last 3 to 4 weeks, if you care to checkout my portfolio and read some of my other works feel free to do so, take care.
Larry

reply by Ronni on 14-May-2009

Thanks Larry, I will indeed look into your Portfolio and read.
I thought you were new, but wan't sure. Welcome aboard!
Glad you're with us here on FS! And by all means, keep
writing and posting. God Bless!
Ronni

reply by the author on 14-May-2009

Thank you so much , I took the liberty of reading some of your work as well and commented on a couple of your pieces. Will check out more soon. I read a bit on your profile and saw you like shortwave, that is cool, I am a Amateur Radio Operator going on 18 years now, like all aspects of the radio hobby.
Larry

Comment from RoseBrandon

Excellent

I really like how sweet and romantic this piece is. it reminds of an anniversary. Reminiscing about love, and finding that it is still there. I think you convey exactly the message that you were trying to with this poem.

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 Comment Written 14-May-2009

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reply by the author on 14-May-2009

Thank you for your kind words I am glad it took you back to a favorite time and day. take care.
Larry