Comment from Pacinogal

Excellent

Excellent post Larry.

"And I knew no other person
could effect me the way you do
taking control of my body and soul
as I surrendered myself to you."

"And even though it was a dream
reality can still be ours
For someday soon we'll touch for real
and make love underneath the stars"

Very, very romantic. Kathy

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009

I am glad you liked it so much.
Larry

reply by Pacinogal on 03-Jun-2009

mmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmm
very, very hot and romantic. Geeeeez I'm gonna have to buy some
ink very soon. I'll prob. end up with a whole book of your poems. LOL

If I press print on your page, it will set up the poem to use as little ink
as possible. I like that.

Fantastic job Larry!!!
Kathy

Comment from pilarblue

Excellent

What a sincere, heartfelt poem full of love and emotion. The fluidiy was pleasing and smooth. This is truly a lovely dream that I'm glad you shared. :)

 Comment Written 12-May-2009

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reply by the author on 12-May-2009

You are very welcome I am glad t hat it touch you so much.
Thank you for the kind words, take care.
Larry

Comment from Clueless

Excellent

What a lovely poem about marriage. This is the second poem I read for the love of a partner. it flows well and shows these still love in the world.

Kind Regards
Innocentchild

 Comment Written 12-May-2009

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reply by the author on 12-May-2009

Thank you so much I am glad that you like it, I have written others on romance and marriage as well. You can see them in my portfolio if you care to check it out sometime, take care.
Larry

Comment from creativewriterUK

Excellent

As ever, you have the touch of magic to the rhyme in this poem. It flows very well and tells a loving story. I thought that the picture was a nice touch and fitted the poems mood. Nice poem... Keith.

 Comment Written 12-May-2009

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reply by the author on 12-May-2009

Thanks Keith, I am glad you like it. And thanks as always for being so supportive of my work.
I finally used a certificate for my poem "Imagine Poetry" but it was placed I think at the 131 spot on the list so I do not expect it to get many more reviews. but it is there for 3 days.

I check out your site on MySpace and I liked it very much indeed. I liked how the page looked and everything, again great job on what you are doing for others with that site. Have a great day today.
Larry

reply by creativewriterUK on 12-May-2009

You are welcome as always Larry, I'm glad you like the site for the magazine, it was Reece our patron who designed and set it up.
Thanks again... Keith.