Handmaidens of Aurora
When Angels Paint ~Series23 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
Oh, it's so good to have you back and to arrive on the scene after so much time with this lovely piece is so wonderful for us all. Just a visually beautiful piece of writing. It's good to be reading you again Helvi!
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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Oh, it's so good to have you back and to arrive on the scene after so much time with this lovely piece is so wonderful for us all. Just a visually beautiful piece of writing. It's good to be reading you again Helvi!
Comment Written 11-May-2009
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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Hi Judian,
Thank you for the wonderful "Welcome Back"!!
It's so nice to know you are missed and that people enjoy what you write. I really missed being here.I know I'm not the greatest on getting back to those that review my work, but I couldn't let this go by without letting you know how much your reviews are appreciated by me. I enjoy reading your work as well and that makes every review from you special. Thank you for your wonderfully kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed my new poem.......You made my day!
Hugs and Smiles,
Helvi
Comment from Rabianabian
Indeed, truly magic. Excellent job. I just love this poem! So descriptive and flowing and light and perfect...you have a gift.
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Indeed, truly magic. Excellent job. I just love this poem! So descriptive and flowing and light and perfect...you have a gift.
Comment Written 11-May-2009
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good Morning Helvi2 ,
all I can say is please compose some more of your
Fantasy poems.
your poem is so well written and Your imagery is out of this world.
to me it's a wondrous dream
wish I had a six
smiles
Gert
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Good Morning Helvi2 ,
all I can say is please compose some more of your
Fantasy poems.
your poem is so well written and Your imagery is out of this world.
to me it's a wondrous dream
wish I had a six
smiles
Gert
Comment Written 11-May-2009
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
A beautiful and creative dream.
The whole scenario of angels flying past, complete with feathers for painting is both alluring and evocative.
A very enjoyable read.
Juliette
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A beautiful and creative dream.
The whole scenario of angels flying past, complete with feathers for painting is both alluring and evocative.
A very enjoyable read.
Juliette
Comment Written 11-May-2009
Comment from VICTIMEYES
if i would change something in this poem it would be those crazy cursive words that are not so good to read for some reason, i like them in short pieces ... but as far as the words and the words, super imagery and imagination, i like the poem's fantasy affect, very captivating.
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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if i would change something in this poem it would be those crazy cursive words that are not so good to read for some reason, i like them in short pieces ... but as far as the words and the words, super imagery and imagination, i like the poem's fantasy affect, very captivating.
Comment Written 11-May-2009
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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HI ES,
Bless Your Heart!!
This is my first six star review from you I know what an extraordinary writer you are, so receiving six stars from you is truly an honor. Thank you so much for believing I deserved it!
Hugs and Smiles,
Helvi
Comment from zydecosal
Your poem is very, very beautiful. The rhyming and meter is perfect and I love the pictures at the top. I'm not sure if I like the red font of the last stanza. Maybe a softer color would be more pleasing to the eye.
Zydecosal
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Your poem is very, very beautiful. The rhyming and meter is perfect and I love the pictures at the top. I'm not sure if I like the red font of the last stanza. Maybe a softer color would be more pleasing to the eye.
Zydecosal
Comment Written 10-May-2009
Comment from apelle
This is absolutely lovely!
Your poetry is spellbinding !
I am not a big creator of fantasy poetry but i can spot good writing when i see it..
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This is absolutely lovely!
Your poetry is spellbinding !
I am not a big creator of fantasy poetry but i can spot good writing when i see it..
Comment Written 10-May-2009
Comment from Jewell McChesney
I am HONORED that you had time to rest and write, envision and create! You've captured the nuance of angelic artists in a way I couldn't imagine. I am thrilled to read your insightful words where the etheral touches of poetic prose grace your fingertips!
Thank you! You are so precious!
Jewell
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I am HONORED that you had time to rest and write, envision and create! You've captured the nuance of angelic artists in a way I couldn't imagine. I am thrilled to read your insightful words where the etheral touches of poetic prose grace your fingertips!
Thank you! You are so precious!
Jewell
Comment Written 10-May-2009
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Again, this is really good. You should start sending these poems off for publication--first to spiritual magazines. I love the imagery; it was so comforting. You handle the abcb rhyme scheme well, except for the first stanza which ends up being bbcb; you might want to change that. I love the words "Heaven's Breath." In Hebrew, the word "ru'ah" means "spirit, breath, and wind," and I think your poem could apply to all three. What a meaningful work, especially to me at this time in my life.
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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Again, this is really good. You should start sending these poems off for publication--first to spiritual magazines. I love the imagery; it was so comforting. You handle the abcb rhyme scheme well, except for the first stanza which ends up being bbcb; you might want to change that. I love the words "Heaven's Breath." In Hebrew, the word "ru'ah" means "spirit, breath, and wind," and I think your poem could apply to all three. What a meaningful work, especially to me at this time in my life.
Comment Written 10-May-2009
reply by the author on 11-May-2009
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Hi Alvin,
I'm glad I wrote something that soothed your wounds a little. Those words touch my heart. Having readers tell me I brighten their day brightens mine too.Because you are a friend and someone I think highly of your words mean even more.
I know my first verse is out of sync with the rest of the poem, but I love the way it describes my feelings. If I can think of something that falls into the abcb rhyme scheme I'll replace the words with something that fits. I am extrememly honored you think I should send some of my poems out for publication.
Suneagle of FS ( Les Stephenson) has already published two of my nature poems in his E-magazine "The Muse Marquee". He saw my poem of the month here and aked me if he could publish it. I was extremely honored as he is still one of the top reviewers here. I didn't receive any money, but I was thrilled he thought so highly of my work.
I haven't sent anything out to any publisher yet, that's new territory for me. I don't know quite what to do or how it's done?
Anyways, Thanks for the wonderful inspiring review my friend.
Hugs and Smiles,
Nancy
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I'll send you some information. Because my memory sometimes falters, could you send me your regular E-mail address in a PM? I would greatly appreciate it.
Hi Al,
Thank you so much...but please don't do anything extra that may take a toll on your energy right now. I'm glad you're still alive and kicking,but don't kick to hard. I read your note about the next poem you're posting And I'll keep my eyes open for it.
My email address is "helvi1@peoplepc.com"
Bless you,
Nancy
Comment from jshep
Magic, to say the least. This is a spectacular poem to associate with the aurora borelesis. The flow and rhyme were exceptional and the descriptions of angels as handmaidens of aurora's smile is brilliant poetic expression. Fantastic job, Helvi. I loved this poem and the imagery you presented. Joyce
reply by the author on 10-May-2009
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Magic, to say the least. This is a spectacular poem to associate with the aurora borelesis. The flow and rhyme were exceptional and the descriptions of angels as handmaidens of aurora's smile is brilliant poetic expression. Fantastic job, Helvi. I loved this poem and the imagery you presented. Joyce
Comment Written 10-May-2009
reply by the author on 10-May-2009
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HI Joyce, Thanks for the wonderful smile you gave me with your response. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi
