Comment from creativewriterUK

Excellent

A very nice love poem and we all search for such a place as you speak of. The poem flows very well and is easy to read. It has a nice sentiment to it and makes me wish I was in such a place at this very moment. Great piece and a very appropriate picture. Keith.

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

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reply by the author on 06-May-2009

Thanks I appreciate that very much Glad this one touched you. And thanks for being a fan.

Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

It's very expressful and loving. It sounds as if it could be used as wedding vows. I enjoyed the image of special place, just for two. A place both of you can go to when the world gets too rough.

 Comment Written 05-May-2009

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reply by the author on 05-May-2009

Thank you for your kind words, I am so glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Deejharrington on 05-May-2009

You're welcome

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

This certainly did paint a picture of a wonderful love shared by two people. This flowed very well. I think you did an excellent job on this.

 Comment Written 05-May-2009

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reply by the author on 05-May-2009

Thank you for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoy it.

Comment from *!*dreamer*!*

Excellent

Your poem was very nice. The flow was consistent and easy. The rhymes were great, they did not seem forced at all. I saw one spag:

"where every magic moment
put(s) a smile upon your face."

Nice poem.

 Comment Written 05-May-2009

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reply by the author on 05-May-2009

Thank you for your kind words I am so glad you enjoyed it. I will make that correction, thank you so much.