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The Same Kind of Different

Equal - Define It

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Comment from jimbo2608
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Hi Ann; a very thought provoking piece of work, and one with which I fully concur.
Not only are men and women equal but I fail to see differences in religion, but another day for that one.
Well done with your work and I do look forward to seeing more of yours.
Jimbo 2608
Jim Pearce

 Comment Written 11-May-2009


reply by the author on 11-May-2009
    Thanks, Jim. I'm in agreement on the whole religion thing. When do you organize that contest? lol. Appreciate your reading and commenting. ann
Comment from Joan E.
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I thought your last paragraph contained your most powerful and succinct argument, and I certainly agree. Not because I am female, but because I am human. Thank you for sharing your well written reflections.

 Comment Written 08-May-2009


reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    Thanks so much for your comments and time in sharing them. the generous review means a lot. ann
Comment from Psychonaut X
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This was an excellent essay addressing the writing prompt "Are all men/women created equal?" I understand why it took first place. The vocabulary was rich and deep. The comparison of knowing a truth, truly comprehending it, to the comprehension of the concept of multiplication, crystallized the thought. Your explanations were straightforward and the debate was solidly rendered. There was no SPAG that I could see. Fantastic job! Congratulations!

 Comment Written 07-May-2009


reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    Thanks so much. I appreciate the "Fantastic job" because I know such comments do not come loosely from you! thanks again. ann
Comment from Treesaw
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This was both interesting and informative, not to mention thought-provoking. I enjoyed reading this. Hope you continue to submit pieces. I will look forward to them. Good job.

 Comment Written 07-May-2009


reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    thanks so much for your generous review. I appreciate your time in reading and commenting. ann
Comment from Jonez08
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Powerful words! Beautiful and eloquently written. The truth rang loud and clear to my ears. So many things jumped from the computer. Everything you have written here is true to my own belief. We are all created equal, but I love this line...We may be limited by the body we occupy, but not by our Creator. Can't say it enough, this is awesome.

Cassandra

 Comment Written 07-May-2009


reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Awesome is how I feel when I get a SIXER from you! I appreciate your comments and very generous review. Sixes from authors whose work I admire mean all the more. Thanks. ann
Comment from Jnetgame
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Very well written essay, Ann. I was going to point out the parts I especially liked, but I had trouble choosing one. I think I like the whole last paragraph the best. Good luck in the oontest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2009


reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    Thanks so much. Your support means a lot to me. I appreciate the generous review. ann
Comment from Sandollar
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This is wonderful and exactly what I had in mind when I posted the challenge. You made very clear points and followed through. Every point led up to your final statement. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

I found no errors.

PS I happen to agree with you.

 Comment Written 06-May-2009


reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    WOW, a sixer means so very much to me. I loved your contest because it made me think. Also it was broad enough to allow for all sorts of ideas. In a big picture kind of way, I believe every word I wrote; indeed, I know it to be true. Still, I understand there are people who look at the everyday, individual situation and it's a whole new ballgame for them. Thanks again for the more than generous review. ann
Comment from Carol D Parker
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This is very interesting. The message is very clear. Your words are easily understood. You present a great argument that we are created equal. I think people will agree with you because your wrting is bright and intelligent. And you have done your research. this is excellent.
Delora

 Comment Written 06-May-2009


reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    Thanks so very, very much. I truly appreciate your reading and commenting. This subject can be approached on so many levels -- from the really big picture to the everyday individual circumstance -- a totally different can of worms. ann
Comment from Nicky B
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I don't understand women. I don't want to understand them. The mystery is just too enticing and attractive. They drive me crazy and I can only thank them for helping me attain this dazzling insanity. Nick.

 Comment Written 06-May-2009


reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    And we don't want to be understood! lol. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. ann
Comment from Comanche
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I like the admission that even liberals of that time and place: "were apt to sign on for that [separate but equal] babble. We were looking for common ground, somewhere between the Ku Klux Klan and those preaching miscegenation." This is a nice piece that takes up a significant topic...

 Comment Written 05-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your time and your thoughts. ann

    By the way, we share a birthday -- 11/11 Scorpios rock!
reply by Comanche on 05-May-2009
    Yes, indeed.... Scorpios..!!