Comment from Tamara Ordinaire

Excellent

This is a nice, tender poem. I am sure that whomever it was written for is very pleased and happy. I like the gentle rhyme & soft words. It is very peaceful and soft. Nice, I like it. Great job!

 Comment Written 01-May-2009

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reply by the author on 01-May-2009

Thank you for your kind words, I am very please that you enjoyed it so much. Take care.
Larry

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

An enchanting love poem. I loved the rhyme and flow of your poem. I can just picture the wine and a glowing fire, all messages of two peopled intimate. You used your words well. Well done - jada

 Comment Written 01-May-2009

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reply by the author on 01-May-2009

Thank you,. I am so glad you enjoyed it, when I write romanitic poetry I like it to send similar messages to people. I am so glad you enjoyed it, take care.
Larry

Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

It's beautiful in a sad kind of way. It seems to say that dreaming is the only way the two people would be together. The feelings and images were wonderful. No errors or mistakes. I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 01-May-2009

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reply by the author on 01-May-2009

I am so happy that you loved this poem. I guess I never thought of it as sad, I suppose one could look at it like that. But it is really just a romantic poen of one telling the other, at night just dream of all we have done and will do together, what we will share and how beautiful it will be. Again thank you, take care and have a great day.
Larry

reply by Deejharrington on 01-May-2009

you're welcome