Comment from joan marie

Excellent

Well, I have to say she is a very lucky woman. This is a beautiful poem you've written for her. Read smoothly. Great writing. joan marie

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2009

Thank you again for your very nice words, you have replied to much of my work I believe, should be about time I get to reading some of yours.

Being pretty new here I am still trying to understand it all but I think it is coming along better now so I am going to try and start reading somethings that other people have wrote, that have replied to me. You take care and have a great day.
Larry

reply by joan marie on 30-Apr-2009

I read from the well received. Available reads under Read next to Home and bonus reviewing. I also have a fan list. But I have been here almost a year. I am selective because I wanted to learn. Rank and ratings stopped meaning much a while back. Have fun and don't try to answer everyone. I did that and got so frustrated it wasn't fun anymore. I review and write usually the beginning of the week. Depends on how prolific I feel and start posting with what I money I have saved from reviewing to post Thursday on. I always get 3 days. Seems like a lot of money, but people have other things to do and it gives more writers a chance to see your work. Enjoy the site. jm

Comment from MsRefusenik

Excellent

So when was the last time you wrote her a nice poem like this one? I hope recently. A woman can't get by just on an 11-year-old poem however nicely done.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2009

I am usually writing some sort of poetry so I am sure it was not that long ago. :) Thank you for enjoying this poem very much.
Larry

Comment from walking_pencil

Excellent

I enjoyed your rhyming and words. Its a very pretty love poem. It makes you wonder why she was not there that one day?
It is very passionate and shows much affection. Bravo

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2009

Thank you for all of your kind words, I really enjoy when others are moved by something I have wrote, take care.
Larry