Comment from zocalo

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. It is very moving. I only saw one correction. You wrote 'quite' when I believe you meant 'quiet' referring to 'rivers'. Other than that it's very well done.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009

Thank you very much for your kind words and especially thanks for the corection I knew I wanted to change something but it kept eluding me. Take care.
Larry

Comment from Tellis

Excellent

Thanks for the really great poem. I enjoyed reading this very well written piece, so please keep up the very good work.

Tellis

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009

Thanks, I appreciate all the freat words, take care.
larry

Comment from Badjuju

Excellent

A beautiful tribute to the one you love. The word flow is smooth and rolls off the lips, presentation is well done. I enjoyed reading this, very well done!!!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2009

Thank you so very much. I do appreciate all the kind words. take care and have a wonderful day.
Larry