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A Leaf on the Wind

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Autobiography of abuse

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Comment from dportwood
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Horrible, horrible treatment by those who ignore the truth about a situation. Your story clearly explains this situation and contains strength in its narrative.

Duane

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
    Thank you for your kind review. This portion of the book is primarily narrative. I usually have more dialoge but chose to present the infomation this way.