Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Dear Forever"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
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Comment from jack silver
life is never simple.
Each time you think you know it, it surprises you.
I have watched alot of things I wish I didn't see.
Just like you...
I have buried a mother... three sisters and a raped child which my step father is the cause of. He raped one of my sisters. He is in prison for that along with being locked away for killing my mother. My wife... my first love was killed along with an unborn baby when a car ran a red light.
Life never gives us the easy way. I hope the happiness I have found With Nattily lasts the rest of my lifetime. I hope what every happiness you find somewhere down the road lasts Just as much. Oh and to give you some real good news... Nattily believes she is pregnant. we don't now what it yet or if its true. we will be going to have it looked to so when we know I will give you an update
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jack
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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life is never simple.
Each time you think you know it, it surprises you.
I have watched alot of things I wish I didn't see.
Just like you...
I have buried a mother... three sisters and a raped child which my step father is the cause of. He raped one of my sisters. He is in prison for that along with being locked away for killing my mother. My wife... my first love was killed along with an unborn baby when a car ran a red light.
Life never gives us the easy way. I hope the happiness I have found With Nattily lasts the rest of my lifetime. I hope what every happiness you find somewhere down the road lasts Just as much. Oh and to give you some real good news... Nattily believes she is pregnant. we don't now what it yet or if its true. we will be going to have it looked to so when we know I will give you an update
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jack
Comment Written 20-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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What a nice surprise to dig into my portfolio and choose this letter/poem and to give it all those shining stars. Thank you so much, Jack.
What you have written about your life is much more than shocking!! How can all this happen to one person, and as I recall, you are still very young. Well, let us concentrate on your happy news with Nattily now, I will wait for the update and wish you well.
Thanks again, dear friend.
Love
Pupa
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how I have made it through is that I have always surrounded myself with people that love and care about me. One of the best things that has happened is Nattily, another is that my real dad came to see me. He and his wife which I still can't bring myself to call her mum have two boys which are twins, just five years old. And three little girls. One is six, the second is five and the third is four.
Comment from justmade
I love the sincerity of this poem. Your words and desires felt genuine. I pray you get the things you need. Doubts at times make things more complicated than they actually are I know that.
Be well my buddy.
Much love,
Justmade.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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I love the sincerity of this poem. Your words and desires felt genuine. I pray you get the things you need. Doubts at times make things more complicated than they actually are I know that.
Be well my buddy.
Much love,
Justmade.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2009
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Thanks my Friend, yes, doubts complicate matters.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PUPA,
Let me say I really like how you pour out your emotions in this poem of fearing to trust especially about having a real loving relationship.
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2009
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Hello PUPA,
Let me say I really like how you pour out your emotions in this poem of fearing to trust especially about having a real loving relationship.
Gert
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2009
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Hi Gert,
Thanks. Have been away for a few days, sorry for the delay in replying.
Love
Pupa
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PUPA
you are so welcome
Gert
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good Tuesday morning to you poet friend!
Pupa, that was a very astinding, romantic and heart touching read. It was beautiful. I understand your notes and it is hard to trust again. It will take at times a greap leap of faith and at other times, just baby steps. I wish you well my friend.
God bless and I hope you have a wonderful Easter!
Loyd
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Good Tuesday morning to you poet friend!
Pupa, that was a very astinding, romantic and heart touching read. It was beautiful. I understand your notes and it is hard to trust again. It will take at times a greap leap of faith and at other times, just baby steps. I wish you well my friend.
God bless and I hope you have a wonderful Easter!
Loyd
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much Loyd, I value your opinion.
Happy Easter to you too, I think you are one week ahead of our Orthodox Easter.
Love
Pupa
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It was my pleasure and I hope you have a good evening. LOyd
Comment from LadyBrendragon
Nice reflections and emotions. You can feel the anguish, doubt and fear while the longing for trust, patience, warmth and peace are also evident. Nice job.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Nice reflections and emotions. You can feel the anguish, doubt and fear while the longing for trust, patience, warmth and peace are also evident. Nice job.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much LadyBrendragon, I value your opinion.
Love
Pupa
Comment from nora arjuna
hi pupa, i always enjoyed your personal approach to these subjects we have to deal with in life. Forever is such a strong word and i could relate to what you expressed here.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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hi pupa, i always enjoyed your personal approach to these subjects we have to deal with in life. Forever is such a strong word and i could relate to what you expressed here.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thanks arjuna, yeah, the trust thing is quite a difficult issue. Appreciate your comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Jo-an
Wow...reading this truly touched my heart, simple but overflowing with emotions and I felt as if I was actually sharing the same emotions while reading it. In my 34 years of living, I've had my share of ups and downs when it comes to love and I agree that one will find it very hard to give their all the 2nd or the 3rd time around. Love hurts, but we can't stop loving. Hope to read more of your writings similar to this one.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Wow...reading this truly touched my heart, simple but overflowing with emotions and I felt as if I was actually sharing the same emotions while reading it. In my 34 years of living, I've had my share of ups and downs when it comes to love and I agree that one will find it very hard to give their all the 2nd or the 3rd time around. Love hurts, but we can't stop loving. Hope to read more of your writings similar to this one.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thanks so much JoanPThank, I value your opinion and appreciate your review.
Love
Pupaeje,
Comment from Jean Lutz
Great writing expressing much truth. I guess in matters of the heart, it withstands many attacks, yet continues to beat. My wish for you is that you find everlasting love.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Great writing expressing much truth. I guess in matters of the heart, it withstands many attacks, yet continues to beat. My wish for you is that you find everlasting love.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thanks so much Jean, for such a wonderful review and kind wishes.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Wendyanne
HI pupa. This is an excellent piece of well written poetry that speaks from the heart. I truly hope that Forever stays this time dear friend
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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HI pupa. This is an excellent piece of well written poetry that speaks from the heart. I truly hope that Forever stays this time dear friend
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Thanks for your comments and kind wishes, Wendyanne.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful but sad poem you have penned. You give so much good advice about the heart. I always love your work. Great art work and wording as always. Love, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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This is a very beautiful but sad poem you have penned. You give so much good advice about the heart. I always love your work. Great art work and wording as always. Love, Teri
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Wow, what a pleasant surprise, Teri. Thank you so much for your encouraging review.
Love
Pupa
