A Leaf on the Wind
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Comment from jsweeney
It's difficult to pick up a story in progress, because it takes a bit of work to puzzle out the character relations. However, this chapter had enough clues in it to be able to do that. I congratulate you on that. The dialog flowed well, and the characterizations were clear, distinct and consistent. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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It's difficult to pick up a story in progress, because it takes a bit of work to puzzle out the character relations. However, this chapter had enough clues in it to be able to do that. I congratulate you on that. The dialog flowed well, and the characterizations were clear, distinct and consistent. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Thank you. While it is a book, many of my chapters can stand alone. I sincerely appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Sometimes baring our souls can be the hardest thing to do, especially to our own children. Why is that I wonder?
Your story as it unfolds, is both dramatic and traumatic.
One cannot read without being touched.
Juliette
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Sometimes baring our souls can be the hardest thing to do, especially to our own children. Why is that I wonder?
Your story as it unfolds, is both dramatic and traumatic.
One cannot read without being touched.
Juliette
Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind words. Yes, baring our souls is difficult especially with our children. I sincerely appreciate your kind words and high rating.
Comment from RaymondJohn
What a gritty story for a biography. I have heard that owning up to what you have done is the first and hardest step to make. Well-written. Packed with tension and emotion. Ray.
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What a gritty story for a biography. I have heard that owning up to what you have done is the first and hardest step to make. Well-written. Packed with tension and emotion. Ray.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind review. I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from butterflykiss
I can't imagine what you went through and are still going through. You had a lot to deal with, and to me it's a wonder that you deal with it at all.
Butterflykiss
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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I can't imagine what you went through and are still going through. You had a lot to deal with, and to me it's a wonder that you deal with it at all.
Butterflykiss
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind words and high rating. I sincerely appreciate it.
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You're welcome.
Butterflykiss
