Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

sherrygreywolf,

I had to check out your Volcano poem after receiving your most honorable review.

This poem is very erotic, as I am sure you have heard from your other reviews. You had me off to Miriam-Webster with
sinuous.

This one is well deserving of the first place!
SweetLinda

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009

Hi again, Linda - glad you liked my poem, Dance of Fire. There were some really good entries for that contest and I was slightly blown away when I won. For some reason, I have always thought that volcanos and love are alot alike - hot, unpredictable, unstoppable, utterly beautiful and, many times, devastatingly destructive. Don't know if any of that came through in the poem, but I enjoyed the experience of writing it.

have a great week - sherry

reply by AnnaLinda on 09-Sep-2009

You are so right about volcanoes and love!

A powerful poem and well deserving of the win!

SweetLinda

Comment from jeslaf

Excellent

Woo-hoo! Great, naughty write, and creative too--I don't think I'll ever look at or think of lava the same way again. Thanks for putting a grin on this poet's face! :)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for the great review. I really wasn't trying to be super naughty when I wrote this - just creative. People have pointed out some stuff to me that wasn't intentional, but actually makes me look MUCH more clever than I actually am. LOL Anyway - glad you enjoyed it ...

have a great afternoon - sherry

Comment from K-Patrick

Excellent

I'm voting on the 'VOLCANO Haiku' contest and as always, I am reading all entries before deciding. The number of entries and need to stay employed prohibit a more detailed review, but I love the way your volcanic tango bumps and grinds. Nicely done.

I wish you the best in the contest.

The only problem
with Haiku is that you just
get started and then
~ Roger McGough (UK Poet)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my haiku. Glad you enjoyed it.

have a great evening - sherry

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

volcano tango ...

hehe. What a clever write this is. Visually stimulating from the title all the way down to the climactic ending. :-) Geeze I'm punny.

Thanks for the smiles here. I can see why you are near the top of the list today.

Fun to read and imagine.

Jj

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my haiku. Glad you got a chuckle out of it.

thanks again - sherry

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

I really enjoyed this fresh approach in this well conceived haiku. The picture you paint is marvellous. It was an unexpected pleasure. Rose.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Morning Rose - Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your encouraging words mean a lot.

glad you enjoyed it - sherry

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

wow, sherry, I love this. love how you deviate from the obvious subject. this is sure hot lol. much enjoyed and all the best to you.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Hi Nora - Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your encouraging words mean a lot.

glad you enjoyed it - sherry

reply by nora arjuna on 17-Mar-2009

I voted and noted you were doing well!

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I'd never have thought of making aerotic notions out of a volcano, though now you've done it, it seems obvious. Such is the heart of a great metaphor. I salute you!

Mike

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Morning Mike - Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your encouraging words mean a lot.

glad you enjoyed it - sherry

Comment from Amicus

Excellent

This is an excellent haiku, sherry. You nailed the required form and produced a vivid mind picture. I like the clever satori--"volcano tango".

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your encouraging words mean a lot.

glad you enjoyed it - sherry

Comment from words

Excellent

Fun, fun, fun.

A great fresh take on the subject!

Oh, my what a giggle!
flows hot after bump and grind
volcano tango

Good Job!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my work. Your encouraging words mean a lot.

glad you enjoyed it - sherry

Comment from JoeKarbo

Excellent

Really excellent imagery in your haiku.
You took this to a new level.
I could see the images within your words.
No errors, just pure haiku.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words of encouragement are appreciated.

have a great week - sherry