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Carving Hope in Cabanatuan

A POW's act to keep hope alive during World War II

34 total reviews 
Comment from jaeladarling
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Thank you for sharing your uncle's touching story. What a survivor he was! Both the poem and the back story were interesting reads. Thank you for sharing this with us, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from joan marie
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This could really apply to all our veterans. Most of whom performed duties and actions we would never have to. Especially those held captive. Beautifully written on a tragedy. We all need to remember. joan marie

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from mildredmolanki
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An incredibly poignant poem, made so interesting by it's reality and your personal link. On reading this I found myself wishing it was presented as a short story, as it has so much info that could be expanded upon. Fascinating. MM

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from Cedar
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What a beautiful piece. It's one of the best that I have read. It is certainly well written and will capture the readers heart. The picture at the end says it all.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from Wendyanne
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Wow what a powerful piece of expertly written poetry Mrs KT. Your story certainly fascinated me although the ending is very sad. What a lovely unexpected gift for those left behind to grieve

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from Carol D Parker
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How can I rate this when I'm crying so mmuch? This is so heart wrenching. It's a poem that tells the truth, shakes the inner being of the reader, and melts his heart. It's beyond a critique. It's perfect. It tells a sad but magnificent story. I'll never forget it. I still can't stop crying...
Delora

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

Comment from Scarlettdreams
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Wow, this is profoundly sad. We owe such a huge debt of gratitude to the men and women that serve our country. You capture well at least one of them here who has made a huge sacrifice. Bravo

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Hello Friend! Thank you for your kind review and for stopping by! diane
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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this is a beautiful tribute to your uncle. it is well written and well presened. thank you for sharing this preciaous memory. good luck.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Hello! So pleased you stopped by and enjoyed your visit! Thank you! diane
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for writing this wonderful tribute to your uncle, which also honors other brave young men, as well. I especially enjoyed three key lines: "figure...would bear testament to his existence," "damaged hands ceased trembling enough to bring life to it" and "carved to keep hope alive". I also found the shape of your poem very appealing.

How marvelous that you have the "robin".

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Hello Joan! Thank you for your thoughtful review! Am so pleased that you stopped by! diane
Comment from Judian James
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Your author's notes brought me to tears. This is an excellent piece of writing and such a wonderful tribute to your uncle who died way too young and in such a misfortunate way. So sad and poignant Diane. excellent

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Hey Fried! So pleased you stopped by this morning (and that you are feeling better!!!) Take Care and thank you! diane
reply by Judian James on 15-Feb-2009
    Hey there! You did receive my check, yes?
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Hello Friend!
    Yes! To your question...but I have had the flu all week as well!!!!!!
    So glad you are feeling better!!
    diane