Take Me Back To The Good Ol' USA
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Celebration?"The Crook in the White House
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Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi L&P,
As our freedom continues to erode...great opening line. Unfortunately many seem to forget that no matter how good a president's intentions are he does not have total power. And more of our freedom is stripped away each day! The greed for money from our government and huge corporations rule our world and they will do anything to get their way. Besides, our Bible tells the story and it is all, but fulfilled. You have presented us with another thought provoking poem. Well written and clear in content. Thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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Hi L&P,
As our freedom continues to erode...great opening line. Unfortunately many seem to forget that no matter how good a president's intentions are he does not have total power. And more of our freedom is stripped away each day! The greed for money from our government and huge corporations rule our world and they will do anything to get their way. Besides, our Bible tells the story and it is all, but fulfilled. You have presented us with another thought provoking poem. Well written and clear in content. Thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 25-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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amen again. It is what people should remember about ex-president Bush. He did not create this mess single handed. God Bless you sister in your wisdom. Barbara.
Comment from Joan E.
I hope you are wrong--I think the "egoism" you sense is more "drive" and an ambition that is probably a necessary requirement for anyone to run for such an office. I agree that our freedom, success in rejecting slavery, and striving for peace have all been eroded. However, I think we have a leader who will respond to our call--after all, it is up to us to help him achieve change.
I enjoyed your minimalism and potent language and above the fact that you made me reflect on our situation. Thank you.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I hope you are wrong--I think the "egoism" you sense is more "drive" and an ambition that is probably a necessary requirement for anyone to run for such an office. I agree that our freedom, success in rejecting slavery, and striving for peace have all been eroded. However, I think we have a leader who will respond to our call--after all, it is up to us to help him achieve change.
I enjoyed your minimalism and potent language and above the fact that you made me reflect on our situation. Thank you.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Thank you Joan for the very nice words. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from joan marie
I firmly believe we are heading straight to a two class system. Those who have and those who have not. And it will just get worse from there. Good read. joan marie
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I firmly believe we are heading straight to a two class system. Those who have and those who have not. And it will just get worse from there. Good read. joan marie
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I think we are already there. I don't mind being on the poor end financially. They can't get me spiritually. Blessings dear lady. L&P2u
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I had it, got sick, lost it, and now live on social security. But I have things no one can take away; my mind and my dignity. jm
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amen sister. I live on that also. Very low, and it's ok. Still Blessed LOL
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I almost fainted when I saw the raise we got this year. Thank goodness I live in a house that has no mortgage. I am blessed in many other ways with my medicare and medicaid. I have doctors that don't charge me a copay when they could. So I am thankful now when I used to be angry about something I couldn't change. jm
Comment from Adri7enne
|You speak of a world in turmoil, but it has always been so. We live between the tragedies. Still, you describe your doubts about the fate of the world and humanity. You make me want to reach out to assure you that hope is not misplaced. Life is still worthy of joy and hope.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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|You speak of a world in turmoil, but it has always been so. We live between the tragedies. Still, you describe your doubts about the fate of the world and humanity. You make me want to reach out to assure you that hope is not misplaced. Life is still worthy of joy and hope.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Oh yes, I do believe what you say, but still can have uneasy feelings also. Thank you so much for your caring words. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from adewpearl
While I do not in the very least share your gut instinct or think this is an egoist behind the mask, I must say that, as a poet, you express your uneasiness well - and I'm judging your poetry, not your politics - this is well written
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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While I do not in the very least share your gut instinct or think this is an egoist behind the mask, I must say that, as a poet, you express your uneasiness well - and I'm judging your poetry, not your politics - this is well written
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Thank you Brooke and for the compliment. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Johnny Carwash
Sorry to say, but I agree. I just hope we are proven wrong in due time. This country can only take so much insanity. Enlightening read.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Sorry to say, but I agree. I just hope we are proven wrong in due time. This country can only take so much insanity. Enlightening read.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I so pray we are wrong Johnny. Blessings and L&P2u
Comment from Nicky B
I remember a young smooth talking senator called Bill Clinton waxing lyrical after his win in New Hampshire during the primaries. I didn't trust him as far as I could throw him. Eight years later I sadly lamented his departure for the Texan village idiot. Sure Mr Clinton could smooth talk his way back into his marriage, but he certainly gave the world a reason to love America too. Overall I thought he did a pretty good job and had a lot more substance than people cared to give him. I think they were just jealous, because how could someone be that charismatic and smart. He just couldn't keep his dick in his pants. And they wanted to impeach him for that?
Obama reminds me a lot of him and they both share the same views even though Bill wanted his wife to take the office. This is a great historic time for America. I just watched an episode of Roots. My God how far America has come. Things won't change overnight of course. In fact they will probably get worse before the wind change will be felt. I do believe Obama is the man for the job. He earned his stripes in Chicago, a tough hinterland to cut your political teeth on. I feel he will be ruthless when warranted, but equally empowering in his intent for the best of your country and the world. I do understand your misgivings, particularly after the last eight years of avarice, war and stripped liberties. I am not writing this to try and convince you one way or the other. I'm just sharing my opinion to someone I love and respect. By the way I really thought the poem was well written and does give one good food for thought.
God bless you Ma and your country.
Nick.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I remember a young smooth talking senator called Bill Clinton waxing lyrical after his win in New Hampshire during the primaries. I didn't trust him as far as I could throw him. Eight years later I sadly lamented his departure for the Texan village idiot. Sure Mr Clinton could smooth talk his way back into his marriage, but he certainly gave the world a reason to love America too. Overall I thought he did a pretty good job and had a lot more substance than people cared to give him. I think they were just jealous, because how could someone be that charismatic and smart. He just couldn't keep his dick in his pants. And they wanted to impeach him for that?
Obama reminds me a lot of him and they both share the same views even though Bill wanted his wife to take the office. This is a great historic time for America. I just watched an episode of Roots. My God how far America has come. Things won't change overnight of course. In fact they will probably get worse before the wind change will be felt. I do believe Obama is the man for the job. He earned his stripes in Chicago, a tough hinterland to cut your political teeth on. I feel he will be ruthless when warranted, but equally empowering in his intent for the best of your country and the world. I do understand your misgivings, particularly after the last eight years of avarice, war and stripped liberties. I am not writing this to try and convince you one way or the other. I'm just sharing my opinion to someone I love and respect. By the way I really thought the poem was well written and does give one good food for thought.
God bless you Ma and your country.
Nick.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Thank you Nicky. I knew you wouldn't agree with this, but I can't shake the feeling. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from smokyeye
Excellent! It was a little bit of a wait for this but it was worth it. It is well thought out and very timely considering inauguration day is looming
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Excellent! It was a little bit of a wait for this but it was worth it. It is well thought out and very timely considering inauguration day is looming
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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LOL thank you for the high compliment dear smoky. I value you thoughts. So happy you liked it. Blessings and L&P2u
Comment from mrsmajor
One of the things I love about this country, is that we all have the right to speak our minds and believe as we will.
I don't believe as you do, but that's alright, I have great faith in Obama, and I am not as skeptical as you appear to be.
I was however, very skeptical of Bush, and that skepticism proved to be correct, I think he was the worst president that I have seen in my years of voting.
Others feel differently and that's their right. I find your piece discouraging, but at my age, I have lived long enough to know there are reasons for all things said and not said.
I am pleased and feel that we are on a path that will make life a bit, safer, healthier, happier, better educated and more inclined to be optimistic. Sorry you don't feel that way. You have said much between the lines I read. I give 5 stars because I see no spag.
Your piece is filled with animosity and it is well noted. Smooth talker, no just an well spoken, honest, educated individual.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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One of the things I love about this country, is that we all have the right to speak our minds and believe as we will.
I don't believe as you do, but that's alright, I have great faith in Obama, and I am not as skeptical as you appear to be.
I was however, very skeptical of Bush, and that skepticism proved to be correct, I think he was the worst president that I have seen in my years of voting.
Others feel differently and that's their right. I find your piece discouraging, but at my age, I have lived long enough to know there are reasons for all things said and not said.
I am pleased and feel that we are on a path that will make life a bit, safer, healthier, happier, better educated and more inclined to be optimistic. Sorry you don't feel that way. You have said much between the lines I read. I give 5 stars because I see no spag.
Your piece is filled with animosity and it is well noted. Smooth talker, no just an well spoken, honest, educated individual.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Thank you mrs for your graciousness. Blessongs and L&P2u
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You are quite welcome, L&P2 U2
Comment from Jazh
I enjoyed reading this poem. You have clearly conveyed your doubts and their foundation. "folley" should be 'folly', but other than that, no SPAG. I particularly like the way you have juxtaposed "long past/soon gone". I hope your gut feeling is unfounded. :)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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I enjoyed reading this poem. You have clearly conveyed your doubts and their foundation. "folley" should be 'folly', but other than that, no SPAG. I particularly like the way you have juxtaposed "long past/soon gone". I hope your gut feeling is unfounded. :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much jazh. correction made. I hope it is also my friend. Blessings and much L&P2u
