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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from DreamChaser
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Been there, done that! Tequila sunrises are to this day, one of my favorite drinks. I also have found that they don't mix well with much of anything. Porcelain kisses? Yep, done that too. Your six words tell an entire night's worth of activities. Well done.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hello DreamChaser! Thanks for taking the time to look over this itty bitty and for your great comments. I would have rather been whooping it up at the party and kissing the lips of that looker than whooping it up in the bathroom by myself. LOL
    Thanks for your kind review.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Marjorie D.
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Ah, yes. I did that once--never again! I wonder how tequila sunrises, Coors, and merlot stack up against my combo: beer, 7&7's and peppermint schnapps. My friends and I started at a bar and wound up at a frat party. Whoa!

Good job, Indy, and good luck!

XO

Marjorie

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    LOL We did some silly things, huh? Thanks for the review and comments, M. I knew I had it bad when I didn't want to just kiss that god, I wanted to flush my head into the next day. LOL
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Terror2s
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I guess it wasn't funny at the time, but this wasw certainly light and humorous. I helped my brother there the night of my senior prom. Terror

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Hello Terror! Thank you for the blinders review! I love getting those! Thanks for your review and comments and I appreciate your taking the time.
    Indy :>)
Comment from lizperkins
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I have been reading these six word stories and the clever minds that create them just fascinate me. Your good humor kills me. Thanks for an enjoyable read. EL

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Hello EL! I'm so glad you enjoyed this itty bitty challenge. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from gjensen
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Funny! Ah, the indiscretions of youth. Given the state you found yourself in, your 'hot date' might have forgiven you the omission of a kiss saving it for the shiny white knight.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Hello gjensen! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this contest entry. I apprfeciate your kind review and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Sorry but I had to laugh at this I am sure it is a scene many of us would have visualized in our past if your old like me that is well done on this humorous six word entry regards Fuller

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Hi Fuller! Thanks for your kind review on this one. It sure was a night to remember...I could hear everyone whooping it up at the party while I was whooping in the bathroom. LOL
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from pitmanette
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I have been there too, just because I stopped social drinking. Great entry into the contest. I have been away for a number of days, away on a trip and away in my head. I love the 6 word contests too.

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
    Hello pitmanette! Thank you very much for the blinders review! I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)