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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from sherrygreywolf
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Whoa Girlfriend - Beer, wind & hard liquor are NEVER a good mix, but I guess you know that now...

Sorry about the missed kiss...Bad New Years Eve, but a good entry to the contest.

sherry

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Hello Sherry! That was a long, long time ago and I learned my lesson! LOL Thank you for your review and I appreciate your comments.
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Eaglewolf
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What a brilliant story. So much said in just 6 words. I can just imagine you leaning over making sacrifices to the porcelain god, no doubt muttering to yourself never again.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Hello Eaglewolf! Thanks for taking the time to look this over and for your kind review. You're right..."never again" were my exact words. LOL
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from ~Dovey
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That doesn't sound like a fun New Year's Eve celebration! A bit cliche, but worth a laugh! I liked the midnight kissing metaphor! I wish you better luck with this contest than you had that night with your hot date! :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hello Dovey! Thanks for taking the time to look this over and for writing a review. I appreciate your comments very much.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Judian James
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Oh, Indy I got sick just reading what you did to yourself. I'm assuming this is the story of a New Year's eve years ago and not this past one ... yuck ... well done

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    No...if you had read the author's notes, I say I was young and stupid. It was indeed many years ago. Sorry I made ya sick. Sheeeeesh. LOL
    Indy :>)
reply by Judian James on 11-Jan-2009
    Well, I have no idea how old you are and if you're like me, you still consider yourself young!!
Comment from Mike K2
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I see how kissing got in there, but luckily I have only prayed to one. I think avoiding one becomes either a sign that you have quit drinking or have figured out how to mix and match while appearing the life of the party, but not overdoing it enough to make one's self sick.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hi Mike! It was a combination of youth stupidity, drinking too much too fast without eating, and that awful mixture of beverages. I know better now...I'm a very mature person now. LMAO.
    Thanks for reviewing, Mike.
    Indy :>)
reply by Mike K2 on 11-Jan-2009
    Love it. I learned the hard way too. Have a great week ahead! Mike
Comment from adewpearl
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I've never had a drink let alone be drunk, but have always wondered why anyone would drink enough to kiss the porcelain god. Good 6 word entry - I'm assuming this was your worst, not best new year's eve. LOL

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Thanks for the review, Brooke. It's never the desired outcome to be kneeling before the porclain god. It wasn't the amount...it was the mix. It was the worst because I sure wanted to smooch with my date, but we made up for it a few weeks later.
    Indy :>)
reply by adewpearl on 11-Jan-2009
    now, that was probably too much information LOLOL
Comment from Curt Mongold
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Not even a kiss? Was it because of something else, or the fact that you had a little dinner in your teeth from throwing up? LMAO!
Been there, done that, burned the T-shirt.
Great entry Indy!
Hugs,
Curt

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hey Curt! I suppose if I had eaten some dinner, I may not have been kneeling before that porcelain god. lol I think it was the Coors that did it. Like a true gentleman, he took me home and we made up for the lack of New Year's kissing at a later date. What a guy! I think I impressed the dude that I didn't pass out. LOL

    Thanks for reading and your review...did you not make it to the bathroom? LOL

    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Domino
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Somehow I believe this story, Kar. LOL. This is a very fun and clever way of describing the lucky recipient of your over-indulgence. Not that I'm nosey, but did you an the 'hot date' have sex without 'kissing'? LMAO!
Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hello RayMan! LMAO....no, the gentleman took me home that night and we more than made up for our un-kissing on New Year's at a later time. I think I impressed him that I was able to walk without falling down and that I never passed out. The stamina of youth. LOL
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Lokman
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LOL! I'm sure he really wanted to kiss you too! ;)

Great one, Indy. Sure I'm glad my Irish blood keeps me from that kind of worshipping.

Shea

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hello Shea! LMAO...well, he was quite the man and took me home. We did kinda make up for the lack of kissy face later on--the next night. Thanks for reading and your review. I bet this brought back a few memories, huh?
    Indy :>)
Comment from ChrisMcLaughlin
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II,
We've all been there. I think it was the wine that was your undoing; one too many poisons in your potion. (Why the hell would you drink Coors?)
Anyway, well written short to the point story. Excellent photograph selection; I like how it's just a stand alone john, like it's on stage & there's nothing else in the world. At that moment that's how the alcohol victim feels.
Whoops, I'm ranting, sorry. Great work as always.
Good luck in the contest,

Chris

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2009


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
    Hello Chris! LMAOOOO....Coors was THE beer back then. It was really cool to drink beer from Colorado Rockies country and it was almost impossible to get in Indiana back then...had to "import" it. LOL Thanks for your review and comments--I love your ranting.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)