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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from prodigal
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Been there. I spent most of my early twenties in a drunken stupor. This is another good one. I once woke up in a strangers bathroom, and someone had used the toilet and not flushed. I am pretty sure it wasn't me. Someone thought that was funny. :( Well done- SAm

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2009

reply by the author on 23-Mar-2009
    Yeah, I was in my 20's when this particular New Years found me missing the witching hour because I was kissing John. I never mixed Tequila Sunrises, beer, and peppermint schnapps after that. LOL
    Thanks, Sam!
    Indy :>)
Comment from DeboraDyess
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Oh ... bummer! I think far too many folks have shared this experience with you! Before midnight? Bummer! Good luck in the contest, Deb

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Hello Deb! Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Karen B.
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Lol, what an awful way to spend any night, especially new years eve with a hot date. Great entry in the contest. Good luck! Karen

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Hello Karen! Young and stupid being the key words here. LOL Thanks for the review and your comments. My date forgave me and we made up for it later. LOL
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello IndianaIrish
Great one,but ugh what a terrible and the worst thing to happen when you want to bring in a brand new year
hut and kiss the porcelain god.
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Hello Gert! Thanks for your kind review and it's always good to hear from you. I voted for your lovely entry and it should beat the pants of everyone else!
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Jan-2009
    IndianaIrish you are so kind
    Thank you
    and you are welcome
    Take care.
    Gert
Comment from JoAnna Lee
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Great, Indy! I've done that one, too... but never again! You told the story in six words, and great pic. Good Luck

Thanks for sharing,
Donna

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Hello Donna! Thanks for your review. We did some foolish things in our younger days, huh? But we learned. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Firefly54
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It's hard to find two and a half lines to say about six words! I'm sorry for this, your worst New Year, but I guess there was a lesson to be learnt! Good luck

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
    Hello Elaine! Yeah, it's difficult writing a review for a six word posting so I appreciate your taking the time to do so.
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from babylonia
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indy,
been there and done that. had a drinking contest to see who could drink the most tequila. no one one. we all stepped aside at the same time. (there were three of us.) all of us blacked out. and two of us were sick. i woke up and didn't know where i was or how i got into my clothes. sigh.
keep up the good writing.
good luck~
love,
barbara
love the pic.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
    Hi ya Barbara! Thanks for looking this over and relating to it. LOL Another reviewer wanted to know how I could let something like this happen to me...like I meant to. LOL Thanks!
    Indy :>)
reply by babylonia on 17-Jan-2009
    indy,
    can't know unless you live it. it happens. what can you do? you either live or hide. i always chose to live. try. learn.
    love,
    barbara
Comment from drivenbackward
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Yeah, those nights are always fun. And a big part of the reason I rarely drink these days. Well done on this. Solid. No errors to report.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Hi DB! When you're young, you think you can mix anything and it won't bother you...wrong. It was a fun night, right up until midnight. LOL
    Indy :>)
Comment from Lynn27
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Hi Indy,

This piece made me laugh! LOL.

I loved how you expressed your words. They painted a picture as I read.

Well done!

Lynn

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Hello Lynn! Glad this gave you a smile. I was young and foolish and it sure put an abrupt end to a fun night. LOL
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from shelley kaye
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ahhahahahaha

not good night - but sure made a great six word story for us ;-)

great one - thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest! :-)













 Comment Written 12-Jan-2009

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2009
    Hello shelley kaye! Thanbks for keeping your book going! It's so much fun reading everyone's six word stories. Thanks for your great review for this one!
    Indy :>)