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Comment from medicnate
I like this, simple six words, tells a story, and also elicits feelings. I like how they took many medicines and not just one, hehe. It makes sense and follows the contest criteria. Well done.
~medicnate~
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
I like this, simple six words, tells a story, and also elicits feelings. I like how they took many medicines and not just one, hehe. It makes sense and follows the contest criteria. Well done.
~medicnate~
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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thank you
Comment from DeboraDyess
Welp, those are polar opposites, aren't they. Been on both sides (except not on a ship). Much prefer the better to the worst! Good entry in to the contest. Blessings, Deb
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
Welp, those are polar opposites, aren't they. Been on both sides (except not on a ship). Much prefer the better to the worst! Good entry in to the contest. Blessings, Deb
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much, this was a hard year for me, and I just had surgery, so I felt like poo, thank you again
Comment from Karen B.
Not a great way to spend any night, especially New Years Eve. You've definitely told a story in six words here. Great entry in the contest! Good luck! Karen
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
Not a great way to spend any night, especially New Years Eve. You've definitely told a story in six words here. Great entry in the contest! Good luck! Karen
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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thank you so much, I needed that, had a bad year, had surgure yesterday, so feeling like poo.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi wierdgrace
I understand the 1st and the 3rd line, but eating pudding must mean something to you
Pretty tricky six words to ponder on
Gert
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
Hi wierdgrace
I understand the 1st and the 3rd line, but eating pudding must mean something to you
Pretty tricky six words to ponder on
Gert
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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No eating pudding, helps with all the medicines, sorry, been a bad year, surgery yesterday, and trying to feel beter so I came to my favorite web site.
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wierdgrace How are you doin and how do you feel?
You are so welcome
Gert
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not good, but need to read a bit for reviewing. thanks
Comment from JoAnna Lee
Yep... doesn't sound like much fun. Your best does though.
You told it in the six words. Good Luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
Yep... doesn't sound like much fun. Your best does though.
You told it in the six words. Good Luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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thank you so much, I was having a bad year. had surgery yesterday, so not feeling well, checking in to feel better, thank you
Comment from Firefly54
It's hard to find two and a half lines to say about six words! I'm sorry for this, your worst Christmas, but hope that you have completely moved on. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
It's hard to find two and a half lines to say about six words! I'm sorry for this, your worst Christmas, but hope that you have completely moved on. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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thank you, and it will get better, I hurt today, surgery yesterday. so enjoying reading others works.
Comment from babylonia
LOL i like your author's notes. LOL it should be that way every new year's eve. :P
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
LOL i like your author's notes. LOL it should be that way every new year's eve. :P
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2009
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thank you , sorry, had surgury yesterday, not feeling well, but have to get better so I thought I would caught up with fs.
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i hope the surgery went well.
love,
barbara
Comment from Vladilynn
mmmmm.....it's hard to have a collection of medicines!! LOLL
and having a sweet treat in the same time to fake the bitter taste of it...ahhh pretty much right for the sleep painless...ahhh how sad but what I can say~ Take care please....love you much!!
Me,
Lynn ( ^ __________ ^ )}}
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
mmmmm.....it's hard to have a collection of medicines!! LOLL
and having a sweet treat in the same time to fake the bitter taste of it...ahhh pretty much right for the sleep painless...ahhh how sad but what I can say~ Take care please....love you much!!
Me,
Lynn ( ^ __________ ^ )}}
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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always try thank you
Comment from c_lucas
Missing words: Take Medicine (ugh!)
Eat pudding. (yummie)
Sleep painless (overdose)
My sadistical interpretation of your brief poem. Good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
Missing words: Take Medicine (ugh!)
Eat pudding. (yummie)
Sleep painless (overdose)
My sadistical interpretation of your brief poem. Good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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i agree, but it is a have too, wish it was i, magery.
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You're welcome, Grace. Charlie
Comment from shelley kaye
hehe very interesting!
what kind of pudding was it? lol
good entry and adition to book
thank you for sharing and good luck! :-)
p.s. could you please change the chapter number from 0 to 203. thanx! :)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
hehe very interesting!
what kind of pudding was it? lol
good entry and adition to book
thank you for sharing and good luck! :-)
p.s. could you please change the chapter number from 0 to 203. thanx! :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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did it changes to 203 loved the contest.