Fanstory's Jewels
Hats off to Helen Steiner Rice, my mom's favorite21 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello! I must share with you that I am not a great fan of Helen Stein Rice; however, I surely enjoy and appreciate the words and thoughts found in your beautifully expressed piece. Informative yet not preachy. You surely hit upon some very important topics regarding being a member of this writer's community. Very well executed. Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Hello! I must share with you that I am not a great fan of Helen Stein Rice; however, I surely enjoy and appreciate the words and thoughts found in your beautifully expressed piece. Informative yet not preachy. You surely hit upon some very important topics regarding being a member of this writer's community. Very well executed. Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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thanks, Mrs KT. I like a lot of her cards for special occasions but my mom adored her books which is why I chose to use her. I try to save my preaching for the pulpit. love, jan
Comment from mslyla216
So true! What a wonderful "paraphrasing" of Helen Steiner Rice. You didn't tell the same story, but you difinitely told your own FanStory following the strict guidelines. This is both clever and most interesting. I like what you had to say and how you said it. Good job and a good entry in the contest. mslyla
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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So true! What a wonderful "paraphrasing" of Helen Steiner Rice. You didn't tell the same story, but you difinitely told your own FanStory following the strict guidelines. This is both clever and most interesting. I like what you had to say and how you said it. Good job and a good entry in the contest. mslyla
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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thanks, mslyla. love, jan
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Rdfrdmom,
From God's jewels to FS jewels. Love the way you put this together with the feeling of Helen Steiner Rice. The fact that you brought FS into what you wrote adds a special touch. I've really enjoyed the writing in this contest. Everyone has followed the path of the orighinal poem, but transposed it to a different setting and circumstances. I think your poem was great
Good Luck in the Contest,
Helvi :o)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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Hi Rdfrdmom,
From God's jewels to FS jewels. Love the way you put this together with the feeling of Helen Steiner Rice. The fact that you brought FS into what you wrote adds a special touch. I've really enjoyed the writing in this contest. Everyone has followed the path of the orighinal poem, but transposed it to a different setting and circumstances. I think your poem was great
Good Luck in the Contest,
Helvi :o)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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thanks, Helvi2. love, jan
Comment from bard owl
This is heartwarming. If we could all recognize the work of others as valuable, the world would be a much kinder place. In "accepting GOd's flawless plan", as you so wisely advise, we would gain so much wisdom. Though His plans sometimes seem strange to our mortal minds, they are plans of a mind wise beyond anything we can imagine. Excellent and thought-provoking. Best of luck in the contest with this jewel. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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This is heartwarming. If we could all recognize the work of others as valuable, the world would be a much kinder place. In "accepting GOd's flawless plan", as you so wisely advise, we would gain so much wisdom. Though His plans sometimes seem strange to our mortal minds, they are plans of a mind wise beyond anything we can imagine. Excellent and thought-provoking. Best of luck in the contest with this jewel. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 21-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2009
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thanks, Linda. love, jan
Comment from AlvinTEthington
A very good supportive poem. You definitely "catch" Rice's style, but localize it in the context of this site. The change of context is so complete your poem doesn't seem like plagiarism. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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A very good supportive poem. You definitely "catch" Rice's style, but localize it in the context of this site. The change of context is so complete your poem doesn't seem like plagiarism. Excellent work.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Thanks, Alvin. Having never done one of these, I was worried about the plagiarism issue. I am relieved that someone of your talents view it within its own context. love, jan
Comment from Signaler
Hello Rdfrdmom2, I enjoyed thie piece very much. It seems to me that it follows the rules of the contests as well as being a beautifully written piece. I am honored to have read it, Good Luck in the contest.
Keep Your Angel On Your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Hello Rdfrdmom2, I enjoyed thie piece very much. It seems to me that it follows the rules of the contests as well as being a beautifully written piece. I am honored to have read it, Good Luck in the contest.
Keep Your Angel On Your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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thanks, Signaler. love, jan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think some of the most gifted people here will never been seen by most because they aren't able to promote their stuff. Your words are true in every line
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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I think some of the most gifted people here will never been seen by most because they aren't able to promote their stuff. Your words are true in every line
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2009
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you are so right, my young friend. love, jan
Comment from steevie
the comparing done between the two halves of your poem is well done
similarities and subtle differences helps th reader to compare and evaluate
nicely done
steve
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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the comparing done between the two halves of your poem is well done
similarities and subtle differences helps th reader to compare and evaluate
nicely done
steve
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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thanks, Steve. love, jan
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you're welcome
steve
Comment from Nicnac
This challenge must have been difficult to do, but sometimes those are the most rewarding, eh?
Great job. I love the poem you wrote and the one that inspired you. The message is clear and somewhat amusing. :)
The reviews that I treasure the most are the ones that better my story or poem, and do that in a kind and knowledgeable manner. I really don't like the mean-spirited (better than thou) reviews. They help no one, including the haughty reviewer.
Writers on FanStory have such a myriad of gifts. When we share our different talents in a giving and constructive way - it is more valuable than any amount of stars.
Thank you for this wonderfully inspiring piece, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, as well as your notes.
Blessings, my friend.
~Nic
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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This challenge must have been difficult to do, but sometimes those are the most rewarding, eh?
Great job. I love the poem you wrote and the one that inspired you. The message is clear and somewhat amusing. :)
The reviews that I treasure the most are the ones that better my story or poem, and do that in a kind and knowledgeable manner. I really don't like the mean-spirited (better than thou) reviews. They help no one, including the haughty reviewer.
Writers on FanStory have such a myriad of gifts. When we share our different talents in a giving and constructive way - it is more valuable than any amount of stars.
Thank you for this wonderfully inspiring piece, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, as well as your notes.
Blessings, my friend.
~Nic
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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I agree wholeheartedly, Nic. love, jan
Comment from amada
I like the thoughtful and provocative by-line: "everyone has something to offer." I know, in a way or another, we all have special to contribute in life. Your mother, Helen Steiner, is a great writer and great philosopher also. What a blessing to have her as an inspiration to your work.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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I like the thoughtful and provocative by-line: "everyone has something to offer." I know, in a way or another, we all have special to contribute in life. Your mother, Helen Steiner, is a great writer and great philosopher also. What a blessing to have her as an inspiration to your work.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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no, amada, Helen Steiner Rice is not my mother. She was my mother's favorite writer. thanks. jan
