Response to School Boy Willie
A response to Loyd Taylor's limerick15 total reviews
Comment from Charlie Crewes
My first read of both limericks. Thank you for your author's notes. Enjoyed your response, "not to pass Dad on the chart"- well-done. Excellent photo.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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My first read of both limericks. Thank you for your author's notes. Enjoyed your response, "not to pass Dad on the chart"- well-done. Excellent photo.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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thanks, Charlie. not supposed to make dad look bad. love, jan
Comment from earthlybeing
Too funny. I would say he was very smart after all. hehe. He knows what side his toast is butter on and that one is important. lol. Thanks and well done. Thanks, Jeanette
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Too funny. I would say he was very smart after all. hehe. He knows what side his toast is butter on and that one is important. lol. Thanks and well done. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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thanks, Jeanette. love, jan
Comment from adewpearl
Your good-natured retort to Loyd's witty limerick makes for a great companion-piece - all I can say is poor Willie! LOL
I love this sort of humor - sometimes we get bogged down in heavy-duty stuff.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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Your good-natured retort to Loyd's witty limerick makes for a great companion-piece - all I can say is poor Willie! LOL
I love this sort of humor - sometimes we get bogged down in heavy-duty stuff.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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yes, we do. I rarely post my poetic comments to folks but couldn't resist posting this one. love, jan
Comment from rmdelta
jan,
well, you know my mind is out west, so that could explain my lack of smarts. lol Great writing my friend. Excellent details that really give power to your poem. Great work, jan.
Reggie
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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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jan,
well, you know my mind is out west, so that could explain my lack of smarts. lol Great writing my friend. Excellent details that really give power to your poem. Great work, jan.
Reggie
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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thanks, Reggie. this just came out of nowhere when I read Loyd's work and could not resist. love, jan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I tried being smarter than my parents in public. I proved made them look stupid but then we got home I was the one who looked stupid. Definately not a smart thing to do
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I tried being smarter than my parents in public. I proved made them look stupid but then we got home I was the one who looked stupid. Definately not a smart thing to do
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2009
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nope, even if you happen to be smarter than your parents, it is better to never make it happen in public. love, jan
