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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Lynn27
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Hi Indy.

What a cute picture for your piece. It was a perfect match too. For six words you have a powerful piece. I loved the title name lol.

Outstanding job!

Lynn

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Oh Lynn, thank you so very much for such a wonderful review. I do love to laugh and try to never let a day pass without laughing...and I'm usually a great topic to laugh about. LOL
    Thank you, Lynn!
    Indy :>)

    ps...thanks for the workshop invite--I hope to get the time to review this weekend!
Comment from Eagle Eye Jerry
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Hey Indy

I agree, it feels good to laugh and smile! And that picture definitely brought a grin to my face. In fact, I defy anyone not to laugh looking at it.

Good luck in the contest, and I hope the message filters through to people.

Eagle Eye

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Mr Eagle Eye of Cork! I try to cram as much laughter into a day that I can. I can always look in the mirror if I need a quick laughter fix. As you already know, I love to laugh...there's nothing better to make me feel so good...ummmmmm...strike that--maybe it's only the second best thing??LMAO
    Thanks for giving me plenty to laugh at, Boyo.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Judian James
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Oh my, a short one to review and please the editor!! Well the photo couldn't be better to go with your words, which brought a big smile. Well done

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hi Jude. Thanks for your review and I'm glad it gave you a smile. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Allezw2
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Lady IndianaIrish,

When you see a small child suddenly find something so much fun that they begin laughing as they play, you know all can be right with the world.

Clever photographer. With digital cameras now, you can almost set the movie camera on run and follow the kids knowing that you will find a good pircture somewhere in there.

My Brownie Hawkeye, my Revere 8mm, the 35mm cameras and my wonderful 140 Yashica, all nearly sixty years old now. They're replaced by our Canons and the dinky little point-and-shoot ones I keep in each of the cars for emergencies.

Nicely done, the best to you in the constest,

Fantasist

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Thank you for your kind review, Fantasist! Music and laughter...I can't have a day without either of them, and the laughter of a child is a musical masterpiece.
    Thank you.
    Indy :>)
Comment from babylonia
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indy,
the baby is adorable. this definitely made me smile. made me laugh. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
sharing laughter is also awesome.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Barbara! Thank you for your kind review and I'm so delighted it made you smile! Thank you.
    Indy :>)
reply by babylonia on 31-Oct-2008
    indy,
    you are very welcome~
    love,
    barbara
Comment from rama devi
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Nice one. Strong message. Adorable photo.

That is my six word review for your spag-free six word story!

warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Thank you for this review, rama devi, and I appreciate your taking the time to read these six words. I can't let a day pass without music and laughter.
    Thank you.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Marjorie D.
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The picture you chose is absolutely priceless. It's the perfect complement to your six words. Nice job, Indy!

Good luck!

Marjorie

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello M! Thanks for looking this one over. Music and laughter...two things I need every day. I appreciate your kind review.
    Indy :>)
Comment from ROBbury
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I like the enthusiasm of the message about the author or narrator. Those six words express so much positiveness that is so needed today.

Also, the photograph is great and blends so well with the six words.

Nice job

ROB

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Rob! Thank you for such a kind and encouraging review. I do love to laugh and I'm glad you enjoyed the photograph...you can almost hear her laughter.
    Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from Jo52800
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Aw, that's so cute and adorable. I think you picked a perfect picture to go with you six-word story. I like it. It was the picture which drew me in. But the story that made me smile. Nice job.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Jo. Thank you for taking the time to read and review this contest entry. I appreciate your kind comments.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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There nothing else to add here I liked this well done on creating this work around the picture there no better medicine than laughter regards Fuller

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2008
    Hello Fuller! Thank you for your kind review and I appreciate your comments. I love to laugh!
    Indy :>)He