Minor Details in the life of ZeeZee
ZeeZee ends up in a cheezy state.19 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
I love the suptle humor hou lace into your work. This is a very enjoyable read. Your sentence structure make the words flow smoothly. This story has good imagery and descriptive scheme. "Yes, Zee, there are snakes in the woods near the water." Running wildly through the woods is a good way to meet with one.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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I love the suptle humor hou lace into your work. This is a very enjoyable read. Your sentence structure make the words flow smoothly. This story has good imagery and descriptive scheme. "Yes, Zee, there are snakes in the woods near the water." Running wildly through the woods is a good way to meet with one.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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Hi hon. thanks for the suggestion. I need all the help I can get. I have to somehow tie all these little vignettes together into something cohesive. Hope I live long enough. Thanks much. ZeeZee
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You're welcome Zee. I am not the originator of this following statements, but I sure you can make good use of it. Piss Poor Lover--"I had him arrested for assault with a dead weapon." Love your writings. Charlie
Comment from babylonia
zeezee,
LOL so it wasn't your strength after all. Hmmmm .... what's a little snake bite between friends? LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. poor guy. the csi would definitely be poking holes in this one. :P
keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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zeezee,
LOL so it wasn't your strength after all. Hmmmm .... what's a little snake bite between friends? LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. poor guy. the csi would definitely be poking holes in this one. :P
keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 24-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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LOL Barbara.. ZeeZee is such a stinker. Thanks for reading. ZeeZee
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zeezee is a stinker, that's what i love about her. :P
love,
barbara
Comment from Nicky B
I think you sliced and diced this one up with carnal precision zeezee. Salacious, crude, amoral, and downright dirty and low down. Snakes and balls abound with irreverent ease. A funny Friday afternoon read for us perverts. Beautiful stuff my wonderful zeezee.
God bless.
Nick.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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I think you sliced and diced this one up with carnal precision zeezee. Salacious, crude, amoral, and downright dirty and low down. Snakes and balls abound with irreverent ease. A funny Friday afternoon read for us perverts. Beautiful stuff my wonderful zeezee.
God bless.
Nick.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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Hello, I need to work on these little vignettes. Maybe someday I will find the time.. Thanks, Sweet Prince. ZeeZee
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
EXCELLENT story with a great ending! Poor Zee had to row the hell outta there as quick as silver! Nice work. Much enjoyed beginning to end. Believable characters and good development of them. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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EXCELLENT story with a great ending! Poor Zee had to row the hell outta there as quick as silver! Nice work. Much enjoyed beginning to end. Believable characters and good development of them. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 24-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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Hello Susanne. I am so please that you enjoyed the little romp in the wilds of Wisconsin. I so appreciate your reading and leaving a review. ZeeZee
Comment from PeekABoo21
Okay, I gotta say, I wasn't sure if I was going to like it at first but I loved it! I thought it was very interesting and edgy, you don't really come across stories like these very often. I think you can really go places with this and expand even further! Great Job! I really enjoyed reading this!!
**Peekaboo**
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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Okay, I gotta say, I wasn't sure if I was going to like it at first but I loved it! I thought it was very interesting and edgy, you don't really come across stories like these very often. I think you can really go places with this and expand even further! Great Job! I really enjoyed reading this!!
**Peekaboo**
Comment Written 24-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2008
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Hi Peekaboo. What a great name you have. I tend to write the ridiculous. I am so please that you enjoyed the read. At the end of the day, that is the best I can hope for. ZeeZee
Comment from Narvik
Hey Zee,
Not a whole lot to slice and dice here. A few mistakes you could easily fix with one more good proofread.
Sloan cuts to the chase with conversation and copulation. (Classic line)
What the fuck are you doing in Wisconsin, you hate Wisconsin?? (Question mark didn't seem to fit)
personal chief (I think you meant chef)
lead to another (led)
Another good story, with sensuality and a nice sprinkling of wry humor. Keep it up, Zee.
~Rhein
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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Hey Zee,
Not a whole lot to slice and dice here. A few mistakes you could easily fix with one more good proofread.
Sloan cuts to the chase with conversation and copulation. (Classic line)
What the fuck are you doing in Wisconsin, you hate Wisconsin?? (Question mark didn't seem to fit)
personal chief (I think you meant chef)
lead to another (led)
Another good story, with sensuality and a nice sprinkling of wry humor. Keep it up, Zee.
~Rhein
Comment Written 23-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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Silly mistakes, but so me. I thank you. You are the best. Thanks for reading and I am off to fix the spaggies. ZeeZee
Comment from adewpearl
Lot's of memories - no apostrophe
foreclose an rowed away - typo here
personal chief you mean chef
I had no idea where this was going when the dead body showed up! This is hysterical. ZeeZee is quite the unconventional heroine! LOL The person who rants and the woman who gets one man to help remove the body of another man from the woods have a bit in common! If you get the chance, take a gander at my presidential essay :-)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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Lot's of memories - no apostrophe
foreclose an rowed away - typo here
personal chief you mean chef
I had no idea where this was going when the dead body showed up! This is hysterical. ZeeZee is quite the unconventional heroine! LOL The person who rants and the woman who gets one man to help remove the body of another man from the woods have a bit in common! If you get the chance, take a gander at my presidential essay :-)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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thanks for the help adewpearl. I am going to become a fan of yours so that I do not miss your post. I like what I read of yours. Smoochers, ZeeZee
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thanks zee zee - you're one of my favorite people on this site - no danger of mixing you up with the other ladies!!
Comment from RaymondJohn
There's a tribe in South America that wrap their young males' penises in a snake skin. Within the days it causes pain and swelling. They leave it on until the pain goes away. The swelling doesn't. Funny story, Zee. I can understand why you were frightened away. Ray.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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There's a tribe in South America that wrap their young males' penises in a snake skin. Within the days it causes pain and swelling. They leave it on until the pain goes away. The swelling doesn't. Funny story, Zee. I can understand why you were frightened away. Ray.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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Hi Ray, I am trying to push ZeeZee out to the universe with these stories.. I would rather push my baby out to the world. Dang it is painful. ZeeZee
Comment from Mouse
HEE HEE!
Those damn snakes ruin everything! lmao
This was very funny, ZeeZee, but I don't have to tell you that. I love the sarcasm and the biting humor ... you truly have a gift!
The only little fix I noticed was this:
"He left himself here, let the bank foreclose an(d) rowed away for what he thought was the last time."
Cheers,
Mouse
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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HEE HEE!
Those damn snakes ruin everything! lmao
This was very funny, ZeeZee, but I don't have to tell you that. I love the sarcasm and the biting humor ... you truly have a gift!
The only little fix I noticed was this:
"He left himself here, let the bank foreclose an(d) rowed away for what he thought was the last time."
Cheers,
Mouse
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2008
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Oh, I love your name. Mouse is such a grand name. Okay, I will fix the spaggie and thanks much for the headsup. Smoochers Mouse. ZeeZee
