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The Sparrow And The Savior

For the least of these, He cares. This is for you.

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Comment from Annmuma
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What I took from this writing is the message that we are never alone, that our help and our saving grace is just a call away. Thanks for the reminder. ann

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It is much appreciated. :-)
    Jan
Comment from adewpearl
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Be it the sparrow, the rescued lost boy, a kitten or the mother with her child in recovery, you make the point that God is there very movingly.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It is much appreciated. :-)
    Jan
Comment from lawriemac
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This is a good piece of writing, sending out one very big message loud and clear.
This is far from preaching, more like informing.
I have one small nit for you to consider:

"warbling praises fills", I think should read "warbling praises fill" - That's just my own opinion and not a question mark about your writing.

A good write and an enjoyable read.
Best wishes
Lawrie

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It is much appreciated. :-)I corrected that nit. Thanks for finding it!
    Jan
Comment from Judian James
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This is a beautifully written, eloquent, elegant piece about the power of our maker. From the tinest ants to the stillness of rocks, he is there and aware. Lovely.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much, Jude! :-)
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from rmdelta
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janilou,

Very well written, excellent choice of words you used in constructing this story. An outstanding work extolling the values of Christianity and it is, and will be, an outstanding work of art in your portfolio.

Well done,

Reggie

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you, Reggie. I really appreciate this review.
    Jan
Comment from Jendowoz
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I think that these are very good examples of the goodness in our world which we do not see enough of. Every creature large or small, human or animal are all important in this world, it is us to us to restore it's balance. My poem "The Portent of Doom" is an example of what may happen if people do not restore this balance.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It is much appreciated. :-)
    Jan
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Janilou. I truly needed to read this today as I have been feeling so lost and alone. I found yuor words very uplifting on this beautiful Sunday afternoon in England

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It is much appreciated. :-) I am blessed to hear that you found this uplifting.
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from dkneale
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Thia piece is so beautiful and very inspiring. It is a reminder of the love Jesus has for ALL! You are filled with the faith and the gift to share...You helped me along the way...Bless, Debra

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much, Debra. Your words have made my night.
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from dreaming
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Thanks Janilou for sharing the truth with us at fanstory. How beautiful is our Saviour who picks up the softy feathery sparrow and gives her new flight. How wonderful He is as he sends a ship to the stranded lonely boy; how warm he is as a mother waits to see if her child is going to live or die. Thanks for mammoth effort. I believe you made your point very clear. God bless.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much. I am very blessed to read your words.
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Janilou:)
Thank you for reminding me. For a believer, I know that all I need to feel the love and help of Jesus is to sincerely ask. Now you remind me that his love engulfs all creation without conditions.

Your writing is beautiful and inspiring. The mental images you evoke are incredible and amplified by positive belief.

Roger

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much, Roger. I really am honored by your kind words.
    Blessings,
    Jan