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The Face of Suffering

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Comment from adewpearl
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What a gentle and loving mother you are to have given your daughter this loving embrace at the time she moved on to a new chapter of her being :-)

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you. I feel I was just being a mother. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from smiles_with_sunshine
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>>>L>o>v>'>n>>P>e>a>c>e>>>

I really don't know what to say, my dearest friend. I'm just glad you were able to hold her as she departed this world; a mother holding and loving her daughter to the very last...and beyond, where she now knows how much she was loved and is free of pain.

Love,
Trish

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you Yrish my dearest, precious friend. ty for your support also. God Bless sweety. Barbara. L&P2u
Comment from Nanny 6
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A very heartfelt poem that brings sadness and tears when read.
now it is timw to rest (time)
but, "oH, how I will miss you baby." (oh)

There is peace in knowing that you know Jesus came for you daughter. Thank you for sharing. Judy



 Comment Written 29-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you Judy and for the corrections. Blessings. L&P2u. Barbara
Comment from GerryMacNeil
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An exceptional poem about an exceptional mother and daughter parting. Beautifully expressed, dear sister, and you certainly give one hell of a bon voyage party. I love you, sis! Gerry

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you dearest sis. Love your words. Gave me a chuckle TY again. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Domino
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I'm SO, SO sorry, Babs.
What can one say to offer you comfort at such an awful time? I SO wish I could. Only you're a lovely, open, honest and unique sweetheart who, I'm sure, will overcome yet another tragedy in your life. If there's a Heaven then I'm CERTAIN your 'baby' will be waiting to greet you, to a huge fanfare, for being the lovely and strong person you are. Carry on, darling, you have much to offer anyone you came into contact with. You are a REAL Angel!
LOVE, Ray xxxxxxx

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 Comment Written 29-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you dear Ray. What wonderful sentiments and praise u give me. I am honored, but feel embarrased as I know I can not life up to them. Many Blessings my friend. L&P2u. Babs