The Face of Suffering
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Comment from Annelisa
This poem is absolutely lovely. As the mother of four, your words touched my heart because I believe there can be no greater loss that that of a child. May God bless you and your family with strength and love through the difficult times.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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This poem is absolutely lovely. As the mother of four, your words touched my heart because I believe there can be no greater loss that that of a child. May God bless you and your family with strength and love through the difficult times.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you Annelisa. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Gail Allred
This was beautiful and my heart goes out to you for being strong. Writing can be such a great way to relieve every kind of feelings in our lives, including death. My prayers go out to you. The glory of it all, is that we get to be together with all our loved ones, and what a glorious day that will be!! God Bless!! Hugs!~MYSTERIA
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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This was beautiful and my heart goes out to you for being strong. Writing can be such a great way to relieve every kind of feelings in our lives, including death. My prayers go out to you. The glory of it all, is that we get to be together with all our loved ones, and what a glorious day that will be!! God Bless!! Hugs!~MYSTERIA
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you MYSTERIA, Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Minglement
My words cannot express how this touched me. How beautiflly you captured those last moments. Very touching and well expressed.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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My words cannot express how this touched me. How beautiflly you captured those last moments. Very touching and well expressed.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you Mingle, Blessings. L&P2u
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You're welcome. I lost my 'baby' too, only I had him longer. It isn't ever easy. No parent should hae to bury a child. God Bless you. Marcia
Comment from Signaler
Dear Lov'n Peace, my heart is aching and I can barely read this poem through my tears. I think that must tell you that you need not change a thing. I"d give you a six if I had one, I offer you a mothers sympathy. It will only be a short time, even if it is years here before you will be together again.
Keep Your Angel On Your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Dear Lov'n Peace, my heart is aching and I can barely read this poem through my tears. I think that must tell you that you need not change a thing. I"d give you a six if I had one, I offer you a mothers sympathy. It will only be a short time, even if it is years here before you will be together again.
Keep Your Angel On Your Shoulder,
As Always, Signaler
Comment Written 20-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you Signalr, Blessings L&P2u
Comment from MumEsGirl
Firstly my sincerest symmpathies on the loss of your pecious child. I can not begin to know the pain that brings.
I love this poem, especially where you saw them come to take her home. I lost my birth mother last year after only 16 months with her and i too know that those that went ahead cradled her with love and brought her to that special place
god bless you - kate x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Firstly my sincerest symmpathies on the loss of your pecious child. I can not begin to know the pain that brings.
I love this poem, especially where you saw them come to take her home. I lost my birth mother last year after only 16 months with her and i too know that those that went ahead cradled her with love and brought her to that special place
god bless you - kate x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you Mum, Blessings L&P2u
Comment from margyl
Hello Lov'n Peace,
I am so sorry for your loss. The poem is beautiful and very heartfelt. My son died three years ago (23 Oct.) and as with your daughter, cancer everywhere. I wish there were words to convey that would make your sorrows go away, but I know none. I will keep you in my prayers. This is well written and I'm sure it offered some release to write about your beautiful daughter. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Hello Lov'n Peace,
I am so sorry for your loss. The poem is beautiful and very heartfelt. My son died three years ago (23 Oct.) and as with your daughter, cancer everywhere. I wish there were words to convey that would make your sorrows go away, but I know none. I will keep you in my prayers. This is well written and I'm sure it offered some release to write about your beautiful daughter. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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So sorry for your loss also margy and thank you, Blessings L&P2u
Comment from LadyMary
As the mother of an ill daughter of 47, this has so deeply touched my heart and soul. A truly beautiful tribute. I shall pray for your peace of heart. LadyMary
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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As the mother of an ill daughter of 47, this has so deeply touched my heart and soul. A truly beautiful tribute. I shall pray for your peace of heart. LadyMary
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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So sorry LadyMary prayers. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Annmuma
I need 6 stars for this. This is well written, the feeling is palpable, as is the hope, the love, the faith and the loss. My heart goes out to you. Good thoughts and prayers are in the air.
I know this is the winning entry in the contest, and even if it is not, it has my vote. ann
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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I need 6 stars for this. This is well written, the feeling is palpable, as is the hope, the love, the faith and the loss. My heart goes out to you. Good thoughts and prayers are in the air.
I know this is the winning entry in the contest, and even if it is not, it has my vote. ann
Comment Written 18-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you so much Ann. Blessings L&P2U
Comment from zwolfspirit
As a mother my self who nearly lost her baby girl when she was two months old to pneumonia I an relate to your poem. Mine is 14 and still my baby. I love to read and write poetry and a poem that can make my heart cry both tears of joy and sadness is in my book a great poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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As a mother my self who nearly lost her baby girl when she was two months old to pneumonia I an relate to your poem. Mine is 14 and still my baby. I love to read and write poetry and a poem that can make my heart cry both tears of joy and sadness is in my book a great poem.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you zwolfspirit, Blessings L&P2u
Comment from Twomoon
lovin...I am so sorry for you and I read this when you did it, and words come that are not fitting to hear..so I will just say.... I hold you dear friend and wish your heart will be only blessed with all the happiness she brought you. much love twomoon
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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lovin...I am so sorry for you and I read this when you did it, and words come that are not fitting to hear..so I will just say.... I hold you dear friend and wish your heart will be only blessed with all the happiness she brought you. much love twomoon
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
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Thank you dearest Mooney. I am Blessed and pass Blessings on to you dear lady. L&P2u
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hugs, tea, and my love, sweet friend.......twomoon
