Ridding Yourself of Demons
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Epilogue"A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted
4 total reviews
Comment from mmichelle97219
Good ending. I wonder if Scarth will ever get tired of ice cream now since I encouraged you through this whole book I demand you send it to a publisher. I know there is one out there who will take it. Maybe there will even be a movie. I recommend PublishersBid.com.
You are under orders, and I expect you will tell me if one buys it.
A very cool and wonderfully creative book.
Michelle
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2008
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Good ending. I wonder if Scarth will ever get tired of ice cream now since I encouraged you through this whole book I demand you send it to a publisher. I know there is one out there who will take it. Maybe there will even be a movie. I recommend PublishersBid.com.
You are under orders, and I expect you will tell me if one buys it.
A very cool and wonderfully creative book.
Michelle
Comment Written 30-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2008
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Thank you. I had the ending in mind (or at least the idea of Scarth in Antarctica) from quite early on, I just wasn't too sure how I'd get there. Thank you for your marvelous encouragement.
Comment from Woodslover
I can't find a thing wrong with your Epilogue. No SPAG problems that I can see. It looks like each character story is getting wrapped up into a little neat package - a nice way to end a book.
I'm curious about one word: ablutions (Is this a term you created in your story or a slang term I shouldn't be asking about?)
Anyway, this was outstanding. After reading only this part of your book I feel safe to say I think you should be ranked much higher than you currently are on this website.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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I can't find a thing wrong with your Epilogue. No SPAG problems that I can see. It looks like each character story is getting wrapped up into a little neat package - a nice way to end a book.
I'm curious about one word: ablutions (Is this a term you created in your story or a slang term I shouldn't be asking about?)
Anyway, this was outstanding. After reading only this part of your book I feel safe to say I think you should be ranked much higher than you currently are on this website.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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No, I didn't invent the word. I don't even think it's slang. It was certainly used 'officially' in the forces and at school when I was a lad.
I'm flattered by your generous review. Thank you
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I went to an online dictionary and now I know the definition of ablution. It's always nice to learn something new.
Comment from mary678
Hi Snodlander,
very nicely done. You've done a good job with dialog. I think you have a good balance between narrative and dialog.
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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Hi Snodlander,
very nicely done. You've done a good job with dialog. I think you have a good balance between narrative and dialog.
Mary
Comment Written 29-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it. I'm always a little nervous I put too much dialogue in.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hello there. oh it's the end of the story already. Though lost to the story, still a great read for me. Love the dialogues and cute ending.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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Hello there. oh it's the end of the story already. Though lost to the story, still a great read for me. Love the dialogues and cute ending.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008
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End already? I thought this was going to take my entire life.
Glad you liked it, despite the lack of context. Thanks
