Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

It is a very well done wind down chapter. The characters are relatively okay and the pace has slowed in a natural pace. very cool.
Michelle

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2008

Thanks. I had toyed with the idea of Oz meeting his demise, but I just couldn't do it. Not sure if Paul will make it to the sequel, though.

Comment from Nanalin56

Excellent

You truly make characters seem live, living beings-very well done. Loved the nurse!

I didn't see any errors-just great writing by a talented writer.

Thanks for sharing your work!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008

Aw, bless. I'm blushing, thank you.

Comment from Merry Peace

Excellent

Hi
it is an interesting story .and seem to be attatched with the previous chapeters . it is easy and simple to get it . characters are wonderful as doing ,speaking and laying on the bed surrounded by the nurse.it is a good job. truely it takes the readers on the place where they are doing. use of colloquial language is effective . well done .

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it

Comment from ladybird

Excellent

A very good follow on chapter. You portray Ozz very well in his dialogue. The reader can just imagine the man himself. I enjoyed this one and will look forward to the next.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2008

The next, at least in this iteration of the book, will be the epilogue. Glad you liked it. I must admit, I quite like Oz myslef, so much so I had to rethink my original idea of killing him off.

Thanks for the review

reply by ladybird on 29-Aug-2008

You're welcome, and yes, I enjoyed this. Can't wait for the next.