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Viewing comments for Chapter 121 "Distractions Can be Fatal"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from Teri7
I only saw four words in this story. If there are six please let me know. I am glad you did survive this accident. It really messed your car up. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2008
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I only saw four words in this story. If there are six please let me know. I am glad you did survive this accident. It really messed your car up. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 04-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2008
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Hi Teri, How could you see only four words? LOL It says " Driver barely injured, couldn't resusitate car." That's six words, but if the faunt caused you any trouble let me know. I'll fix it. Thanks for the review my friend. Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from Terror2s
This one had me laughing. Well, I guess as long as you were okay , the car was replaceable. Great job with his one. Terror
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This one had me laughing. Well, I guess as long as you were okay , the car was replaceable. Great job with his one. Terror
Comment Written 02-Sep-2008
Comment from CARoseKlix
These are powerful 6 words. The picture of the wreck is mind boggling. I'm so glad you survived the accident. Good luck in the contest.
Rose
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2008
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These are powerful 6 words. The picture of the wreck is mind boggling. I'm so glad you survived the accident. Good luck in the contest.
Rose
Comment Written 01-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2008
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HI Rose, I thought it would be a good lesson for people who don't use their seat belts. The para-medics told me if I hadn;t been wearing it I might have gone through the windhield, so make sure your wearing yours. Thanks for the great review and the contest wishes. Helvi :o)
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You are welcome.
Rose
Comment from heyjude
Helvi,
Wow. I'm glad you didn't have worse injuries. Too bad about the
car, but they can be replaced. A hornet in the car probably would
distract me too. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Helvi,
Wow. I'm glad you didn't have worse injuries. Too bad about the
car, but they can be replaced. A hornet in the car probably would
distract me too. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Hi heyjude, Thank you for the concern about me and the wonderful review. I was amazed when I saw the car. My first thought when I saw it was, I can't believe that I don't have more serious injuries. If there was a time to be gratefu,l this was it. I appreciate your kind words. Helvi :o)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This reminded me of when my brother got in his car accident. He caused in and managed to total 2 cars and a gas truck. Everyone walked away from that accident but now he's being sued but everyone is in good health now and thats all that counts. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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This reminded me of when my brother got in his car accident. He caused in and managed to total 2 cars and a gas truck. Everyone walked away from that accident but now he's being sued but everyone is in good health now and thats all that counts. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 24-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Boy, was he lucky! A gas truck? A lot of people could have been seriously hurt or killed. I'm glad everyone walked away from that one.... I was amazed that I didn't suffer any injury either and am very grateful to still be here. Thank you for stoping by to review. Helvi :o)
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Hello Darling lady. Your kind heart rings true throughout the lines of your author's notes. Love the six word story you tell. You truly have a creative gift! Thanks for sharing this wonderful read and a piece of your life...again!
Jewell
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Hello Darling lady. Your kind heart rings true throughout the lines of your author's notes. Love the six word story you tell. You truly have a creative gift! Thanks for sharing this wonderful read and a piece of your life...again!
Jewell
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Hi Jewell, You always make me feel like I actually can write. Thank you for the more than lovely review. Helvi :o)
Comment from Dru Koyote
Helvi2,
Whew! Your car is freaky. Glad you got out relatively intact. This is a valuable lesson about how quickly things can go bad. My son turned his head to the right to make sure he was clear to change lanes - when he saw the passenger side airbag deploying - he said he then had time to think, I'm having a serious accident!
Once over the shock he suddenly felt panicky about getting out of the car because he thought he saw or smelled smoke. It turned out that it was some kind of gas released by the airbag.
Dru Koyote
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Helvi2,
Whew! Your car is freaky. Glad you got out relatively intact. This is a valuable lesson about how quickly things can go bad. My son turned his head to the right to make sure he was clear to change lanes - when he saw the passenger side airbag deploying - he said he then had time to think, I'm having a serious accident!
Once over the shock he suddenly felt panicky about getting out of the car because he thought he saw or smelled smoke. It turned out that it was some kind of gas released by the airbag.
Dru Koyote
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
Comment from babylonia
helvi,
danger is always present. wearing a seatbelt is always a good idea. cars .... what can i say? i have seen some crazy things with them.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
good luck~
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helvi,
danger is always present. wearing a seatbelt is always a good idea. cars .... what can i say? i have seen some crazy things with them.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
good luck~
Comment Written 23-Aug-2008
Comment from shelley kaye
lol
very interesting and original!
only thing i can suggest is maybe to make it two lines?
"Driver barely injured ~
couldn't resuscitate car."
good luck in contest
thank you for sharing.... and for changing the chapter number too! ;-)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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lol
very interesting and original!
only thing i can suggest is maybe to make it two lines?
"Driver barely injured ~
couldn't resuscitate car."
good luck in contest
thank you for sharing.... and for changing the chapter number too! ;-)
Comment Written 22-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2008
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Hi Shelley, After you've been through an accident like this I thought it would be nice to add a little humor. I'm glad it wasn't the other way around and that's a good reason for anyone to smile. Thanks for the great review. I enjoyed entering your contest. Helvi :o)
Comment from L K Pinaire
Wow! You were very fortunate. All kinds of bad things could have happened and didn't. Maybe someone was watching over you. Thanks for sharing.
Good writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008
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Wow! You were very fortunate. All kinds of bad things could have happened and didn't. Maybe someone was watching over you. Thanks for sharing.
Good writing,
Larry
Comment Written 22-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008
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"WOW!", is absolutely right! That's what I said when I saw the car. I couldn't imagine anyone surviving a crash or not being seriously injured, but here I am. I feel incredibly lucky. I know someone was looking out for me. My mother had over a dozen instances growing up where she could have died or been seriously injured. It began the day she was born with the umbilical cord wrapped around her neck. I think I inherited some of her Guardian Angels. Thank you for your kind words. Bless You! Helvi :o)
