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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from jlsavell
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Teri7, wish I could do these, but I am just ot verbose. Best wishes on the contest....what a boulder story..jlsavell
keep writing great lines

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you. Hugs, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
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and heavy ones too lol :-P

great entry and addition to the book!

good luck in contest and thank you for sharing! :-)



p.s. responded to your pm - could ya put this on chap. 118
thanx! :)



 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you.I will put that chapter number on my entry. Hugs, Teri
Comment from heyjude
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Teri,
That definitely could change your life is a huge boulder fell
on you. Beautiful picture that you chose to go along with your
6 word story. Good luck.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you. Hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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Small ones hurts, too! Equate the rocks to problems and you know Who will protect you. Very good imagery and very good descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank You Charlie. Hugs, Teri
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Look out for big falling rocks
Hi Teri. This is a lot said in such a minute space.
I think that this is a superb contest entry. Good luck in it
Bear

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you Bear. Hugs, Teri
Comment from earthlybeing
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I liked this one. It brought back memories of driving in the mountains and they have these little orange plastic fences with big sign look our for falling rocks. Like that little plastic fence will stop them. Enjoyed. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you Jeanette. Love, Teri
Comment from mmichelle97219
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Arn't those words to live by,huh? We spnd our time just trying to get through the day without anything too big hitting us in the head. It is a very good addition.
Michelle

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you Michelle. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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I like this piece it works really well with the chosen art work this is a challenging contest that I think you have lived up too well done regards Fuller

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri