Ridding Yourself of Demons
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "The Summoning"A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted
4 total reviews
Comment from mmichelle97219
You can't send him back. I am sure if Pau won't take him Ess will. She seems to be very fond of him. Another well written cativating read.
Michelle
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2008
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You can't send him back. I am sure if Pau won't take him Ess will. She seems to be very fond of him. Another well written cativating read.
Michelle
Comment Written 15-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2008
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Maybe I will, maybe I won't. Maybe there's a third option.
Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're still in there with me.
Comment from jadapenn
Hi snodlander,
I'm new to this game so can't give you professional comment. I liked what I read, became friends with the crowd in chapter 24. Will probably go back to chapter 1. You have a very good command of dialogue and it's good to read a seasoned writers work.
Good work. Jadapenn
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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Hi snodlander,
I'm new to this game so can't give you professional comment. I liked what I read, became friends with the crowd in chapter 24. Will probably go back to chapter 1. You have a very good command of dialogue and it's good to read a seasoned writers work.
Good work. Jadapenn
Comment Written 14-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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Haha, what a polite way to call me old, thank you.
I'm glad you liked it, and flattered that you did so mid-stream, so to speak.
Comment from DrCook
Very engaging and kept my interest quite well. Great characters I love the inept demon! Thanks for sharing your imagination!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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Very engaging and kept my interest quite well. Great characters I love the inept demon! Thanks for sharing your imagination!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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No, thaks for sharing your review. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from sandrusza
I'm hooked! I haven't read any of the other chapters as I'm new to the site, but I will definitely be doing so. I love this kind of humour and you do it brilliantly. The dialogue flows natually, and the personality of the characters shines through - I'm convinved Oz is a mate of mine;-) - the same loud, larger than life, salt of the earth type person. Some great lines - e.g. "I am happy to inform you we will not be sacrificing any virgins or goats this evening, Alf..."
"Want to know what I'm wearing underneath?" "A world of no, Oz. I don't even want to think about it."
Classic -Cheers for making me laugh out loud...many times!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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I'm hooked! I haven't read any of the other chapters as I'm new to the site, but I will definitely be doing so. I love this kind of humour and you do it brilliantly. The dialogue flows natually, and the personality of the characters shines through - I'm convinved Oz is a mate of mine;-) - the same loud, larger than life, salt of the earth type person. Some great lines - e.g. "I am happy to inform you we will not be sacrificing any virgins or goats this evening, Alf..."
"Want to know what I'm wearing underneath?" "A world of no, Oz. I don't even want to think about it."
Classic -Cheers for making me laugh out loud...many times!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2008
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You're very kind. Thank you for your generous review and six. I am doubly flattered that you enjoyed this chapter out of context. Oz is a mixture of a friend I used to work with (so lustful and outrageous he went through disgust and out the other side, so you couldn't take offence) and Brian Blessed, I think.
I'm glad it appealed to you
