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5 total reviews
Comment from Wordsnmusic
The text threw me off....but that is my own opinion....otherwise I enjoyed it much. Keep it up and I'd love to readmore. Thank you
Amber Lara
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The text threw me off....but that is my own opinion....otherwise I enjoyed it much. Keep it up and I'd love to readmore. Thank you
Amber Lara
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend.
I enjoyed your peom and thought is contained a rather thought provoking message. A good piece.
I found nothing negative.
Thanks, Loyd
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Hello poet friend.
I enjoyed your peom and thought is contained a rather thought provoking message. A good piece.
I found nothing negative.
Thanks, Loyd
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
Comment from Chip3952
Its okay; life can be beautiful; you are not alone; we are here to help you with your talent.
Keep working at it as you are doing; just express what is in your soul; you will make that connection you are seeking both with the reader as well as that place within yourself; you will pleasantly surprise yourself when that happens. Keep it up.
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Its okay; life can be beautiful; you are not alone; we are here to help you with your talent.
Keep working at it as you are doing; just express what is in your soul; you will make that connection you are seeking both with the reader as well as that place within yourself; you will pleasantly surprise yourself when that happens. Keep it up.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
Comment from MCRodgers
I do not read a great deal of poetry. I find it usually to be so much drivel, but occasionally I encounter a poem that is brief, to-the-point, and written in such a way that I am captivated, and will actually give pause to reflect on the words. I truly enjoy such brief respites and you were able to deliver this beautifully. Thank you.
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I do not read a great deal of poetry. I find it usually to be so much drivel, but occasionally I encounter a poem that is brief, to-the-point, and written in such a way that I am captivated, and will actually give pause to reflect on the words. I truly enjoy such brief respites and you were able to deliver this beautifully. Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
Comment from RaymondJohn
What a downer. I'm glad I took my anti-depression medicine before I read it. Very vivid imagery, and your message comes out very cledarly. Fine write. Ray
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What a downer. I'm glad I took my anti-depression medicine before I read it. Very vivid imagery, and your message comes out very cledarly. Fine write. Ray
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
