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Ridding Yourself of Demons

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A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted

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Comment from mcdaniel1299
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I read more for content than SPAG and found at the end that this was probably a quicker write than normal. I enjoyed this chapter, it held a lot of the awkwardness of a first date, very believable. I am anxious to see what happens next, did Scarth behave while they went outside? Poor little thing.
I enjoyed this chapter.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2008
    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Comment from LadyMary
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This writing has really intrigued me as I am new to FanStory and have yet to read the prior chapters. Well written, good action, and the characters' interaction leaves me curious. I'll be anxious to see what Paul and Ess find for themselves in Oz. Much enjoyed, LadyMary

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 05-Aug-2008
    Thank you. Oz is a person, rather than a place. Im flattered you enjoyed it, even without the previous chapters (though this may be simply a lack of good stuff to compare it with)
Comment from mmichelle97219
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I could just see the two of them getting together and "raising" Scarth instead of sending him back. Boy wouldn't that be an interesting family dynamic. Good post.
Michelle

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 04-Aug-2008
    She might, but I can't see Paul coping that well.

    Glad you liked it. Thanks