Teardrops From Heaven.
A birthday message45 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
First off, happy birthday, however belated. I hope you gorged on cake, popped several balloons and were generally lovingly fussed over by your loved ones.
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Write to her? How will that help? She can't read it. She's d. . ." (this is all I found, Jan. It's hard to tell who's "D". Sneaky ending, but it's confusing with the "She's D . . ." being uttered by Margaret.
A VERY nice story, dude. I loved it.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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First off, happy birthday, however belated. I hope you gorged on cake, popped several balloons and were generally lovingly fussed over by your loved ones.
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Write to her? How will that help? She can't read it. She's d. . ." (this is all I found, Jan. It's hard to tell who's "D". Sneaky ending, but it's confusing with the "She's D . . ." being uttered by Margaret.
A VERY nice story, dude. I loved it.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Aw, I was trying to trick you into thinking Margaret was going to say "She's dead" when in fact what she was saying was "She's down there (on earth) and I'm up here in heaven."
My birthday was very nice! :-) My eight year old daughter made me two birthday cakes, so yes, "gorge" would be a most appropriate description. I am very blessed.
Thanks for the terrific review!
:-)
Jan
Comment from nitad
Okay,this one needs to come with a "have a full box of kleenex handy when reading" warning!! Oh my gosh, I was sobbing by the time I got to the end. And what a twist...for the mother to be writing the letter from heaven.
Beautiful.
BTW - Happy Birthday!
Nita
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Okay,this one needs to come with a "have a full box of kleenex handy when reading" warning!! Oh my gosh, I was sobbing by the time I got to the end. And what a twist...for the mother to be writing the letter from heaven.
Beautiful.
BTW - Happy Birthday!
Nita
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Wow! Thank you so much for this review! I am so glad you understood my story. You are exactly right on the twist. Your review so made my day!!
Thanks for the birthday wishes too. :-)
Hugs,
Jan
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You are quite welcome! Nita
Comment from Teri7
This was a wonderful story you have written. You are so talented my friend. I hope to be that good one day. God bless you and Happy Birthday. Love you, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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This was a wonderful story you have written. You are so talented my friend. I hope to be that good one day. God bless you and Happy Birthday. Love you, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Thank you so much, Teri!
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from FlaFaerie
Hello there
What a wonderful story this was to read.. very powerful and moving..
I love the two different angles you gave us.. and how each one faces the loss and birthday passing... very well done..
don't see any errors you need to fix..
hugs
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Hello there
What a wonderful story this was to read.. very powerful and moving..
I love the two different angles you gave us.. and how each one faces the loss and birthday passing... very well done..
don't see any errors you need to fix..
hugs
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Many thanks for this wonderful review! It is much appreciated.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from tteach
This is well written. The spaces between POV shifts really helps with the transition. I like the idea of writing to someone who has passed. It's a cathartic experience, as we all know.
terry
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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This is well written. The spaces between POV shifts really helps with the transition. I like the idea of writing to someone who has passed. It's a cathartic experience, as we all know.
terry
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008
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Thank you so much, Terry!
:-)
Jan
Comment from luna
How could I look for errors when my eyes were so full of tears? I don't know what's wrong with me lately, everything I read is making me cry. This was no exception, you always have a knack of bringing forth my emotions. This was well done and a poignant story. It made me think of my grandma, that's who I'm missin'. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us, my dear, dear friend.
Love,
Jenny *smile*
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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How could I look for errors when my eyes were so full of tears? I don't know what's wrong with me lately, everything I read is making me cry. This was no exception, you always have a knack of bringing forth my emotions. This was well done and a poignant story. It made me think of my grandma, that's who I'm missin'. Thanks for sharing your incredible writing talent with us, my dear, dear friend.
Love,
Jenny *smile*
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Oh, Jen, you are so sweet. Thank you very much for your wonderful review.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Annmuma
I've missed reading posts from you! Guess you are just busy. Anyway, this is a super way to return -- if only for a few minutes!. Good job. Excellent read and a tug at the heart strings. I enjoyed it very much as I realized how much I miss all those I love and who have gone before me. thanks. ann
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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I've missed reading posts from you! Guess you are just busy. Anyway, this is a super way to return -- if only for a few minutes!. Good job. Excellent read and a tug at the heart strings. I enjoyed it very much as I realized how much I miss all those I love and who have gone before me. thanks. ann
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Thank you! :-) So glad you liked this one.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from bookishfabler
Very nice my friend. I love the turn around. It really made you think, and I had to admit, I went back to read the first part again. Good job. I lost both my parents. Missed Dad this year on Fathers Day. Thanks for sharing
hugs
book
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Very nice my friend. I love the turn around. It really made you think, and I had to admit, I went back to read the first part again. Good job. I lost both my parents. Missed Dad this year on Fathers Day. Thanks for sharing
hugs
book
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Many thanks, book. Bless your heart.
Jan
Comment from davidray
Hi jan,
It has been a while since I've heard from you. Hope all is well. Thanks for posting a personal side of you tonight. I enjoyed this. I didn't look for erros. I chose instead just to relax and languish in your talent.
Thanks for sharing. :)
David
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Hi jan,
It has been a while since I've heard from you. Hope all is well. Thanks for posting a personal side of you tonight. I enjoyed this. I didn't look for erros. I chose instead just to relax and languish in your talent.
Thanks for sharing. :)
David
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Thank you, David. You are always so kind. Your review is much appreciated.
Jan
Comment from Sylvia Page
Oh Jan this is such a beautiful and perfectly written story. There are no spags in it too. Lovely. Heart warming, happy birthday to Louise.
Happy writing
Sylvia
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Oh Jan this is such a beautiful and perfectly written story. There are no spags in it too. Lovely. Heart warming, happy birthday to Louise.
Happy writing
Sylvia
Comment Written 17-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008
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Many thanks, Sylvia! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
