A Wedding from Heaven - senyru
Thinking about my Jon37 total reviews
Comment from kassey
Great senyru, Teri, they are , at least to me, one of the most difficult forms to do, you have pictured it perfectly in your short verse, nothing else is needed to be said. Great work Kay
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Great senyru, Teri, they are , at least to me, one of the most difficult forms to do, you have pictured it perfectly in your short verse, nothing else is needed to be said. Great work Kay
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you Kay. It does take some mind thinking for me to do them. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Vladilynn
How beautiful to remember times that been a memories of our lives.
Thinking that time will be there like the same before....such a thing that in reality only memories remains. And the time passed away.
How lively is your memories Teri and I really envy it.
Thank you for sharing
Lynn ( ^ _____ ^ )}}
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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How beautiful to remember times that been a memories of our lives.
Thinking that time will be there like the same before....such a thing that in reality only memories remains. And the time passed away.
How lively is your memories Teri and I really envy it.
Thank you for sharing
Lynn ( ^ _____ ^ )}}
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you Lynn. Hugs, Teri
Comment from RaymondJohn
Lovely Senryu. You have done a masterful job of using motion, instruction and surprise. Yout bio interests me. A good friend of ours developed MS in her thirties. She was a willing test subject for any and all new medicines. I hope they find a cure soon. Best. Ray
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Lovely Senryu. You have done a masterful job of using motion, instruction and surprise. Yout bio interests me. A good friend of ours developed MS in her thirties. She was a willing test subject for any and all new medicines. I hope they find a cure soon. Best. Ray
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you Ray. I do know they are coming out with a pill pretty soon which beats the heck out of shots every other day. I look like a dalmation. lol Hugs, Teri
Comment from Jonez08
Hi Teri, beautiful poem. As always, you display such pure love for Jon. One day you shall meet again. Nice artwork. I love your picture. It's nice putting a face with your reviews. God bless and take care
Cassandra
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Hi Teri, beautiful poem. As always, you display such pure love for Jon. One day you shall meet again. Nice artwork. I love your picture. It's nice putting a face with your reviews. God bless and take care
Cassandra
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from charissw
Hi Teri,
There is absolutely nothing wrong with what you have written. It is soulful, it is touching. When I read it I wondered if you had considered a bit of rhyme as well. I am giving a sample below even though I am aware these things are so personal and have their own meaning to the writer.
"walking hand in hand
knowing where we always stand
you are always mine
there will always be more time"
Blessings, Chariss
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Hi Teri,
There is absolutely nothing wrong with what you have written. It is soulful, it is touching. When I read it I wondered if you had considered a bit of rhyme as well. I am giving a sample below even though I am aware these things are so personal and have their own meaning to the writer.
"walking hand in hand
knowing where we always stand
you are always mine
there will always be more time"
Blessings, Chariss
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you my friend. That would be good but the senyru is 5/7/5. Hugs, Teri
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See, that is how much I know about poetry. I knew it was fine like it was, and I wondered about that. So much I do not know about poetry and prose. My mother was a well-known Mississippi poet. I suppose she inspired my love of writing.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings, Chariss
Comment from earthlybeing
Loved the poem. I can understand that still loving your Jon that would be a natural thing. It is so hard to accept things like this when they happen so suddenly. I truly pray that your heart may be filled with peace. Luv ya! Jeanette
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Loved the poem. I can understand that still loving your Jon that would be a natural thing. It is so hard to accept things like this when they happen so suddenly. I truly pray that your heart may be filled with peace. Luv ya! Jeanette
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Love you too my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from kchitti
not sure why but I want the 2nd line to end with stand instead of always... :-) probably just been rhyming too much lately in my head.
heaven does offer us the prospect of unlimited time to do so many things. I hope it's true :-) I think I have a lot of work to do still. Surely he's thinking of you too, Teri.
keep writing the good stuff!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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not sure why but I want the 2nd line to end with stand instead of always... :-) probably just been rhyming too much lately in my head.
heaven does offer us the prospect of unlimited time to do so many things. I hope it's true :-) I think I have a lot of work to do still. Surely he's thinking of you too, Teri.
keep writing the good stuff!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you my sweet friend. I am like you. It seems funny without rhyme. Hugs, Teri
Comment from mmichelle97219
The timing was off for this lifetime, maybe in the next you will find each other again. I thought this was an excellent post.
Michelle
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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The timing was off for this lifetime, maybe in the next you will find each other again. I thought this was an excellent post.
Michelle
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you Michelle. Hugs, Teri
Comment from EllieKaye
Just me again-
This one says so much in so few words, (Which is the point, I know) but you used those few words well- nice choice and nice composition.
It's always refreshing to read your positive outlook through poetry.
Enjoy your day-
Ellie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Just me again-
This one says so much in so few words, (Which is the point, I know) but you used those few words well- nice choice and nice composition.
It's always refreshing to read your positive outlook through poetry.
Enjoy your day-
Ellie
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Thank you Ellie. You always make me smile. Love, Teri
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Teri what else can I say very sad but what a wonderful picture to go with your well written ---senyru.
Like the last line. Yes the feeling I get you mean you and Jon will have more time when you both are in heaven together.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Hello Teri what else can I say very sad but what a wonderful picture to go with your well written ---senyru.
Like the last line. Yes the feeling I get you mean you and Jon will have more time when you both are in heaven together.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Gert, You had it just right. Love, Teri
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God Morning teri, Good I'm glad I had the meaning of you poem
see you later.
Love
Gert
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Thank you Gert. I hope you and Stan are doing ok. Love you, Teri
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Hi Teri, well Stan is not doing so good. He has to have an MRI on his back and I still have trouble with my neck, traction everyday for the pain and we both are finding it hard to do our usual activites in life.
I say thank God for my freiends on Fanstory it helps me to forget our troubles
One of these days I will get in the mood to come back on and write
Love you and thank you so much for asking.
Take care.
Gert
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I pray that you both feel better soon. Love, Teri
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Hello Teri Prayers are great. the best healer
Love
Gert
