Red Geraniums
Free Verse Narrative: Fading into the darkness. .54 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
I too have been in that very same spot Diane. My mom died on July 4, 2005 for elderly onset dementia. Until the day she died she knew who everyone was and what everything was for but couldn't remember what happened from one minute to the next, so repetition was common. This is a poignant, beautifully written accounting. Thank you for sharingand "for a lifetime of red geraniums and trailing ivy". . .
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I too have been in that very same spot Diane. My mom died on July 4, 2005 for elderly onset dementia. Until the day she died she knew who everyone was and what everything was for but couldn't remember what happened from one minute to the next, so repetition was common. This is a poignant, beautifully written accounting. Thank you for sharingand "for a lifetime of red geraniums and trailing ivy". . .
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned. The meaning of it was great too. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery. Love, Teri
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned. The meaning of it was great too. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery. Love, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
Comment from Earthwriter
very nice piece of sentimental verse remembering someones lost pssion i have seen it with my own mother not able to do the things she used to do
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very nice piece of sentimental verse remembering someones lost pssion i have seen it with my own mother not able to do the things she used to do
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
I am sorry for your loss! I lost my mother ( age 98 ) a couple of years ago.
As for the nice write......I thought it was nice and told a story in a nice, yet different manner! Thanks for sharing this nice story in the format! Cletus Hardiman
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I am sorry for your loss! I lost my mother ( age 98 ) a couple of years ago.
As for the nice write......I thought it was nice and told a story in a nice, yet different manner! Thanks for sharing this nice story in the format! Cletus Hardiman
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
