Sundays with you
To my husband Dave.53 total reviews
Comment from TheSeanRobbins
A very engaging piece. From the beginning, I felt the tone and pace at which you intended me to read. It was very laid back, but passionate at the same time.
I enjoy the humor at the end with the reference to the telephone. I just turn my cell phone off, haha. Great work!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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A very engaging piece. From the beginning, I felt the tone and pace at which you intended me to read. It was very laid back, but passionate at the same time.
I enjoy the humor at the end with the reference to the telephone. I just turn my cell phone off, haha. Great work!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Thank you TSR. I liked your interpretation to my story because it's so true. Laid back but passionate, oh yes. Turning the cell phone off made me smile, haha. I hope to read more of your work.
Comment from EllenV
I love this, Amada. It is written so beautifully ... such poetic thoughts. I love all of it, but especially these lines:
My world is barely contained by the caressing walls and the festive clutter in this room. You are at the center of it all, making everything brighter, and healthier, and lovelier.
I am so very, very happy for you and your fairy tale romance. I also got a kick out of the Sunday word puzzles you do and don't do every week.
A lovely read.
ellen
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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I love this, Amada. It is written so beautifully ... such poetic thoughts. I love all of it, but especially these lines:
My world is barely contained by the caressing walls and the festive clutter in this room. You are at the center of it all, making everything brighter, and healthier, and lovelier.
I am so very, very happy for you and your fairy tale romance. I also got a kick out of the Sunday word puzzles you do and don't do every week.
A lovely read.
ellen
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Thank you Ellen for the delightful review. Your words highlightening your special passage are special to me, the festive clutter is life, simply life.
Comment from ZephyrBird
Loved it. Felt the lazy Sunday morning, and smelled the cinnamon rolls baking. Took me back to Sunday mornings when all five of us kids would climb into bed with dad and read the paper while mom made breakfast. Later, sometimes, dad would make his homemade cinnamon rolls. Beautiful story and beautifully told. Okay, we have to say something we didn't like about this also, and I only have one small problem...the annoyed floor...how can a floor have feelings? annnoyance, etc. Okay, other than that...loved it!!!!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Loved it. Felt the lazy Sunday morning, and smelled the cinnamon rolls baking. Took me back to Sunday mornings when all five of us kids would climb into bed with dad and read the paper while mom made breakfast. Later, sometimes, dad would make his homemade cinnamon rolls. Beautiful story and beautifully told. Okay, we have to say something we didn't like about this also, and I only have one small problem...the annoyed floor...how can a floor have feelings? annnoyance, etc. Okay, other than that...loved it!!!!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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I'm so glad it brought back sweet childhood memories, ZephyBird. It paints a lovely family life, it good to keep those memories. The annoyed floor, I personalized it, it's annoyed because is full of clutter...writer's poetic license?
Comment from heyjude
Amada,
How lovely to be able to enjoy a day with your husband and
not want it to end. It seems you have learned to enjoy each moment. I enjoyed your story and learning a little more about you.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Amada,
How lovely to be able to enjoy a day with your husband and
not want it to end. It seems you have learned to enjoy each moment. I enjoyed your story and learning a little more about you.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Yes heyjude. I watched The New Earth with Oprah. It says to enjoy the moment of Now. That's life, to appreciate it and be grateful for it. Thank you for your interest in learning more about me. I am open....
Comment from schiestyboy
I love the flow of this story, very poetic and eloquently expressed. Sundays doing nothing are the best days. They go way too fast. Thanks for sharing this :)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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I love the flow of this story, very poetic and eloquently expressed. Sundays doing nothing are the best days. They go way too fast. Thanks for sharing this :)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2008
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Thank you schiestyboy for the great review and the hooray for Sundays.
Comment from sueseagull
A wonderful tribute to the love of your life. You can feel the love it was written with as you read it. SImply lovely. You gotta love those lazy days, we need them more often than we allow ourselves to have them.
Sue
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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A wonderful tribute to the love of your life. You can feel the love it was written with as you read it. SImply lovely. You gotta love those lazy days, we need them more often than we allow ourselves to have them.
Sue
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Thank you for the great comments. Sue, and I also wish you a lot of lazy days
Comment from Nanny 6
This story touched my heart. Maybe because I have a Dave too and am on a second marriage that has a stronger foundation than the first. I loved your descriptive words describing and comparing the two marriages. your also gave warm fuzzies, the way you describe the "home" Good job. Judy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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This story touched my heart. Maybe because I have a Dave too and am on a second marriage that has a stronger foundation than the first. I loved your descriptive words describing and comparing the two marriages. your also gave warm fuzzies, the way you describe the "home" Good job. Judy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Thank you judy f for the great review to my story; similar to yours. We are blessed.
Comment from mmichelle97219
Rituals of nothingness sound like a wonderful way to spend a Sunday. I thought the soft tone of the piece was fantastic. An excellent post.
Michelle
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Rituals of nothingness sound like a wonderful way to spend a Sunday. I thought the soft tone of the piece was fantastic. An excellent post.
Michelle
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Thank you mmichelle 97219 for the great review to this account of a day.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Sounds like a comfortable, relaxing day, especially restful when the weather is horrible ;p
Don't know what you mean by this: We merrily pink twirl ???
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Sounds like a comfortable, relaxing day, especially restful when the weather is horrible ;p
Don't know what you mean by this: We merrily pink twirl ???
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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"merrily pink twirl" was an inspiration that's all, meaning we are happily twirling around, as silly persons. I thought it was cute, so I wrote it before it faded away. Thank you for the review, RazberryBullet.
Comment from starman
Ah, what a nostalgic and enjoyable diary entry to read. It had that cosy almost fuzzy warm feel to it that makes for a relaxing day.
Very nice
:)s
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Ah, what a nostalgic and enjoyable diary entry to read. It had that cosy almost fuzzy warm feel to it that makes for a relaxing day.
Very nice
:)s
Comment Written 02-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2008
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Thank you starman for the most lovely review. :)
