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keeping hope alive....

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Comment from Norzah
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'A lullaby in rainbow' is the line that fires my imagination where colors transform into soft whispery words to lull one into sleep just as the sun itself 'whispers goodnight,' Love the haiku.

 Comment Written 08-May-2008

reply by the author on 08-May-2008
    hehe thanx! :-)
Comment from ravenshadowwinds
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Well, I like it too. I like the phrase "lullabye in rainbow" it is beautiful and descriptive and yet, not so cliche as some phrases used in poems. This is original, and it is wonderful.

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thanx lots :-)
Comment from Nanny 6
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This is a beautiful contest entry! The picture you selected goes very well with the content of your poem. Good luck in the contest. Judy

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thanx!! :-)
Comment from Judian James
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This is lovely. It's extremely visual and poetic. I loved:"sun whispers goodnight" This is a wonderful haiku that perfectly suits the picture.

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thank you so much :-)
Comment from gerry26
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You should like this one, it is amazing. You have told an entire story in such a short verse. I loved the line sun whispers goodnight) Talented! Good luck.

gerry

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    lots are liking that line!
    thanx :-)
Comment from Vladilynn
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This is soo beautiful...To see a rainbow at night??

The words sings with delight. Pictures really speaks well for the addition of your lovely inviting lullaby.

Thank you for sharing~

Lynn ( ^ 0 ^ )}}} getting sleepy with that peaceful scene.

Nice meeting you!!

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    lol thanx lots! :-)
Comment from elainec4
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I loved your message to "listen to the ocean within". It does prepare the reader for what's coming. Beautiful words, beautiful image. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thanx! :-)
Comment from malachi1206
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An excellent poem well written well constructed and full of meaning and well what can I say I really liked it write on malachi1206

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thank you much :-)
Comment from Charles Keith
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Hi shelly
Impressive expression of nature's beauty with this excellent haiku.
Loved the picture.
Very best of luck in the contest.
Kind Regards
Keith

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    thanx! :-)
Comment from bkrighter
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Luna, this is a wonderful haiku. The images are exquisite. They allow you to pack so much into the poem (I know, that is one of the goals of Haiku).

Great work. Good luck in the contest.

STeve

 Comment Written 07-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    luna?

    lol
reply by bkrighter on 07-May-2008
    Sorry about that. I had read something by luna just before reading your wonderful Haiku. This is not the first time I have done that, but usually I catch myself when I proofread my review.

    In any case, I was not confused about my enjoyment of your work.

    Steve