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Comment from Focused True North
This is a very lovely haiku. It's a striking picture that matches up well with your gentle words. Enjoyed reading it very much.
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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This is a very lovely haiku. It's a striking picture that matches up well with your gentle words. Enjoyed reading it very much.
Comment Written 09-May-2008
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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thanx! :-)
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Hi Shells!
This is purrrrfect dahling!!! I love it. You've written a perfect Haiku. A great contest entry; I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
Love,
Pea
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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Hi Shells!
This is purrrrfect dahling!!! I love it. You've written a perfect Haiku. A great contest entry; I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
Love,
Pea
Comment Written 09-May-2008
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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i wish me luck too LOL! ;-)
Comment from earthlybeing
Beautiful poem and the presentation is breath taking. I love the poem. It is well though out and flows wonderfully. Thanks for sharing it. Jeanette
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Beautiful poem and the presentation is breath taking. I love the poem. It is well though out and flows wonderfully. Thanks for sharing it. Jeanette
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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thanx lots :-)
Comment from skye
Your poem is a beautiful haiku, with strength, beauty, and wonderful artwork to enhance your words..
It reads easily, has good detail, and the picture is well-chosen.
Well done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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Your poem is a beautiful haiku, with strength, beauty, and wonderful artwork to enhance your words..
It reads easily, has good detail, and the picture is well-chosen.
Well done.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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thank you thank you :-)
Comment from Robert Fejeran
I think it's beautiful. I admire the writer's ability to express so much with so little. You are definitely a graceful writer. Thanks for sharing.
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I think it's beautiful. I admire the writer's ability to express so much with so little. You are definitely a graceful writer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 09-May-2008
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from Sleep
Hi Shelley,
I guess it is a good thing that I like it very much as well then eh?
In fact I like it very, very much.
Everything about this poem breathes light and warmth and tranquility, the picture, the atmosphere and of course your wonderfully selected words!
Beautiful, you should promote more, you just never know what other people read and breath into your writing, perhaps your favorite is not someone elses?
Great Poem!
Good luck,
Regards,
Neil.
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Hi Shelley,
I guess it is a good thing that I like it very much as well then eh?
In fact I like it very, very much.
Everything about this poem breathes light and warmth and tranquility, the picture, the atmosphere and of course your wonderfully selected words!
Beautiful, you should promote more, you just never know what other people read and breath into your writing, perhaps your favorite is not someone elses?
Great Poem!
Good luck,
Regards,
Neil.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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lol - i just don't like spending my money LOL
Comment from Artasylum
well you should promote i looke for poems and more than not my time is very restricted and it is hard to really dig...and every time i read you i enjoy....i'll look for you in the future...yours, diana
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well you should promote i looke for poems and more than not my time is very restricted and it is hard to really dig...and every time i read you i enjoy....i'll look for you in the future...yours, diana
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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thanx! :-)
Comment from Soloneili
Melikey this too. It sits really well with the image and as haiku is supposed to do, says it all, yet leaves room for the reader to continue reflecting on the words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Melikey this too. It sits really well with the image and as haiku is supposed to do, says it all, yet leaves room for the reader to continue reflecting on the words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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than kyou lots! :-)
Comment from Earthwriter
excellent haiku and the picture you have chosen enhances your work nicely i really like your writing it has powerful message
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excellent haiku and the picture you have chosen enhances your work nicely i really like your writing it has powerful message
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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thank you so much! :-)
Comment from Grimgranite
I love this short piece of work of yours, its short and thought provoking. I hope you the best in the contest and hope you win. Keep up the good job and continue writing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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I love this short piece of work of yours, its short and thought provoking. I hope you the best in the contest and hope you win. Keep up the good job and continue writing.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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thanx lots! :-)
