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Comment from inspire me
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Absolutely perfect! It includes all the elements of a traditional haiku: a theme dealing with nature, strong imagery, beautiful language, and an unexpected last line. The picture adds a lot to it as well. Nicely done, and congratulations on winning the contest! It was much deserved.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
    thank you sooo very much!! :-)
Comment from sheilamarie
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Lovely image, lovely sentiment! I love how you integrated the whole. Congratulations on winning the contest!
sheilamarie

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
    big thank you smiles!! :-)
Comment from Mischief's Momma
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Yes you did indeed won - very many congrats to you. It is a lovely haiku, and a very well deserved win.

Now you get to go shopping, or out for a meal or something fun I hope to celebrate :)

Well done!
MM


 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    probably shoppin' lol :-)
Comment from butterflygiggles
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I love it! The picture is perfect. Congrats on a job well done! A rainbow, a lullaby all wrapped up in a poem what could be better? Can't wait to read the other poems in your book.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    hehe thank you lots and lots! :-)
Comment from Sandman
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fantastic job
great haiku
perfect picture
excellent topic and it's no wonder this won
congrats ma'am
;)
excellent haiku

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    thankya sir ;-)
Comment from kiwi bloke
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Hi there SHELLEYKAY

Concratulations on winning the Haiku contest

It was very well deserved I thought, with the

haiku and the picture working so well together

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    thank youso very much! :-)
Comment from starkat
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Congratulations on winning the Haiku Site Contest!!!....real $$$...ha, don't spend it all in one place...;-) really shelley...it's a fabulous haiku and deserves to be #1...Way to go!....yay...and it looks cool on you bio, too..

Keep up the fun, creative writing...and class-act stuff like this haiku...

Cheers...
starkat

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    hehe thanx sooo much!!!!!!!!! :-D
Comment from storymama
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Congratulations! Your poem is beautiful and the picture with it is, too. I can see why you won this contest. Keep up the great work. God bless you.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    thank you thank you thank you thank you soo very much!!!! :-) :-) :-) :-)
reply by storymama on 28-Jul-2008
    You are so very welcome. Hmmm, are you excited yet? I know I would be, too. Lol God bless. Laura
Comment from lythampoet
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You did well to promote this
The picture and the Haiku complement each other perfectly
Though the Haiku would shine anyway
I thought I had a six left sorry Shelly

Max x

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2008

reply by the author on 19-Jun-2008
    thank you so much :-)
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello shelley,

This is beautiful ... soft and delicate. Truly a beautiful haiku.
The photo "complements" and "compliments" your poem. Good luck in the haiku contest. Keep writing.

This poem was an enjoyable read.

Regards, LateBloomer

 Comment Written 11-May-2008

reply by the author on 11-May-2008
    thank you so much :-)