Comment from Red Heart

Exceptional

The "sun whispers goodnight" what a fantastic line ... may I use it in one of my future writes. ;-)
Also, a beautiful picture you have chosen to frame your haiku thought.
This is a winner.

Red Heart

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

as long as you say where you got it from LOL!
thanx lots! :-)

reply by Red Heart on 06-May-2008

I meant all that I said. ;-)

RH

reply by frankie1O1 on 29-Jul-2008

*wink*

Comment from grassroots08

Excellent

Shelley,
Why did you wit until now to bring out your big guns. This one blew me a way. Still waters run deep and obviously short wordage for you does too. You acn really pack a lot of meaning into a small piece can't you!!! This one is going into my bookcase. See ya, If you need me I'll be in my library going over some of my Fan - Favorites. Don

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

hehe - if you liked this one - you'd probably like my "haiga inspirations" book and my "picture perfect points to ponder" book hehe :-)

Comment from Thomas Raine

Excellent

That's a really nice haiku to go along with that picture - reminds me of days when I was younger, after it rained, and a rainbow might appear in the sky...

Thanks for sharing!

- TR

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 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 06-May-2008

thanks for reading and reviewing! :-)