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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from medisec
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This is quite profound, Teri. I'm glad you've found solace in your spiritual beliefs.

Good luck in the contest.

Medisec (Rae)

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

reply by the author on 20-May-2008
    Thank you Rae. God bless. Love, Teri
Comment from Just2Write
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This work is a statement of triumph, Teri and it was uplifting to read, knowing all that you have been through. I am so glad to know that you are starting to accept your new life path.

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

reply by the author on 19-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God is so good to me. Love you, Teri
Comment from DragonSkulls
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Great write Teri. Hope He heals that heart for you. It's a rough life when he don't. Not too much else to say about these short poems. Good luck

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from queennsydney
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Very interesting. makes the reader think, why is your heart broken? It also has a religious feel to it.
Pretty good job, good luck.
~sydney

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you. God bless. Teri
Comment from Annmuma
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Creative presentation. Complementary picture that adds a million more words to the 6 entered in the contest. good luck. ann

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you Ann. God bless. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Artasylum
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i wanted to give you six stars but it didn't offer me...i must have given you two within the last month...i'm sorry...your writing is always great tery..thanks so much ... good luck...yours, diana

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you Diana. Love, Teri
Comment from jshep
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Thank goodness for the healing power of our faith. It is a strong link in the mending of grief. Strong presentation and testament to your faith. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from starkat
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Hi Teri7...Six word story...says so much in six words, as a memoir. Super presentation with the artwork. Hearts that are broken need healing. Healing is positive action..doing something to restore, or fix the heart. Some broken hearts will require divine intervention to truly heal. In this story, Jesus is the one who will heal your broken heart.

Good luck in the contest. Hope your heart is fully healed someday...

Be well,
starkat

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from Eleiece K.
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I SO agree with this wonderful story told completely in just a handful of words. Well done, indeed.

Best regards,

Eleiece K.

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 18-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Can you send your friend my way. I have a broken heart and then some. I could use some help. You did a wonderful job and I loved the picture

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

reply by the author on 07-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God is my friend for all that bothers me. Just reach out and touch him. That is all that has helped me. Love, Teri