Water Colors
Reflections in Water34 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
Use your writing to get you through the best and the worst of times. That is how I wrote my first book.
You really have an incredible command of poetic license and use of poetic devices.
This is terrific.
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Use your writing to get you through the best and the worst of times. That is how I wrote my first book.
You really have an incredible command of poetic license and use of poetic devices.
This is terrific.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I think this is quite beautiful,
so well thoughtout and well
presented, with a smooth flow
to words, and to both rhyme
and rhythm.
It would be difficult to choose a verse
I like the best, as it is all quite perfect.
A pleasure to review...
Regards,
Margaret.
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I think this is quite beautiful,
so well thoughtout and well
presented, with a smooth flow
to words, and to both rhyme
and rhythm.
It would be difficult to choose a verse
I like the best, as it is all quite perfect.
A pleasure to review...
Regards,
Margaret.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2008
Comment from giftid3
This is fantastic. I loved this. You have a wonderful grasp and concept of both life, nature and the beauty within. Your talent with words and imagery is a blessing to read and I thank you for sharing such grandeur. Your personal battle that tries to hold back this gift you have to express yourself will one day be a distant memory, and from the experiences faced you will find how special indeed you are to God, for only the elite and unique created in God's image are plagued in ways to demean, depress and oppress, simply because the gift given is far greater than we can imagine and is a gift that can change the face of the world. Blessings to you in every possible way to bring harmony and peace to your tormented soul.
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This is fantastic. I loved this. You have a wonderful grasp and concept of both life, nature and the beauty within. Your talent with words and imagery is a blessing to read and I thank you for sharing such grandeur. Your personal battle that tries to hold back this gift you have to express yourself will one day be a distant memory, and from the experiences faced you will find how special indeed you are to God, for only the elite and unique created in God's image are plagued in ways to demean, depress and oppress, simply because the gift given is far greater than we can imagine and is a gift that can change the face of the world. Blessings to you in every possible way to bring harmony and peace to your tormented soul.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2008
Comment from Sylvia Page
This is an exceptionally splendid piece of poetry and a beautiful picture that blends so well. Aren't these surroundings a panacea for depression? Helvi you seem to be a person that thrives on nature and it's abundance. I am happy to meet you here. Take care,
Happy writing
Sylvia
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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This is an exceptionally splendid piece of poetry and a beautiful picture that blends so well. Aren't these surroundings a panacea for depression? Helvi you seem to be a person that thrives on nature and it's abundance. I am happy to meet you here. Take care,
Happy writing
Sylvia
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi Sylvia, I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem so much. Thank you so much for the wonderful six star rating. Beautiful scenery combined with peaceful serenity is a lovely panacea. I absolutely love nature and writing about it is one of my favorite passions along with humor.Thanks for lifting my spirits with your compliments and leaving behind a smile. Bless You, Helvi :o)
Comment from amada
This is just wonderful, it brought my senses to that magnificent place you are talking about. As a prayer and a meditation. This one is one for keeps.
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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This is just wonderful, it brought my senses to that magnificent place you are talking about. As a prayer and a meditation. This one is one for keeps.
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi amada, Sometimes words seem to flow out of no-where and that's what happened here. I guess you can tell through my poem I love nature. Thank you so much for the incredible six star rating. I am extremely honored to receive such a glowing review. I am also thrilled by the fact that you bookmarked it too. WOW! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!! Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from PUPA
Hi Helvi,
Welcome back, hope you are feeling better.
I am amazed how much you saw in this beautiful picture to make you write such an outstanding poem. I really enjoyed the imagery and wording of each line. The poem flowed so easiyl and smoothely till the end and the rhyme was great.
Well done, just beautiful.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi Helvi,
Welcome back, hope you are feeling better.
I am amazed how much you saw in this beautiful picture to make you write such an outstanding poem. I really enjoyed the imagery and wording of each line. The poem flowed so easiyl and smoothely till the end and the rhyme was great.
Well done, just beautiful.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi PUPA, Thanks for the warm welcome back! I am thrilled by the response I received with this poem. I remember the day I took the picture. The reflections in the water were so beautiful. The words to describe it just poured out of me. Thank you for the lovely review it is appreciated very much along with the smile you left behind. Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from mmichelle97219
There is nothing more beautiul that a moment or emotion so erfectly captured in a poem. This was a terrific post, Helvi.
Michelle
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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There is nothing more beautiul that a moment or emotion so erfectly captured in a poem. This was a terrific post, Helvi.
Michelle
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi Michelle, WOW! Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, asI am floating on cloud 9,10 and 11. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the marvelous review and incredible smile. Bless You! Sending Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from heyjude
Helvi,
How lovely! The picture you chose goes beautifully with it.
Where pretty water colors splash in photogenic hues. Beautiful phrases.
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Helvi,
How lovely! The picture you chose goes beautifully with it.
Where pretty water colors splash in photogenic hues. Beautiful phrases.
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi H., This was a case of which came first, the chicken or the egg? In this particular case it was the picture. I took the photograph about two years ago. It was so beautiful I knew I was going to write about it. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem and the picture that inspired it. Thank you so much for the lovely review. Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from Godfrey
Helvi2 Oh, my, this is beautiful! No six have I to share this morning but most certainly deserving. Extremely well written. Just wonderful. Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. G
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Helvi2 Oh, my, this is beautiful! No six have I to share this morning but most certainly deserving. Extremely well written. Just wonderful. Enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. G
Comment Written 03-May-2008
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow Helvi. This is stunningly beautiful. Yuo have used some truly exquisite imagery to describe the picturesque scene. Thanks for sharing this and I hope you are feeling better dear friend
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Wow Helvi. This is stunningly beautiful. Yuo have used some truly exquisite imagery to describe the picturesque scene. Thanks for sharing this and I hope you are feeling better dear friend
Comment Written 02-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hi Wendyanne, WOW! I don't know what to say you've left me speachless. You've helped me on the road to recovery just by writing this extraordinary review. I am extremely honored to receive it my friend. Thank you so much. xoxoxo Helvi :o)
