My Scotties
Loving my Scotties25 total reviews
Comment from PoetinTraining
Perfect! -- Imagery at best! within required lines for this contest. Pleasing and simple flow as well as enjoyable
to read. PiT
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
Perfect! -- Imagery at best! within required lines for this contest. Pleasing and simple flow as well as enjoyable
to read. PiT
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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thanks, PiT. love, jan
Comment from heyjude
Jan,
Loved your mini-monoverse. Dogs can be so much fun as they
run. They definitely do provide us with love and affections. They don't ask much in return. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
Jan,
Loved your mini-monoverse. Dogs can be so much fun as they
run. They definitely do provide us with love and affections. They don't ask much in return. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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mine just ask to sleep with me which is fine. love, jan
Comment from PoesyPoet
Oh boy, you just made this a very touch choice. Now I love three that I'll have to do eeny, meeny miney moe, or maybe I just won't vote. NOT. Good luck!
PP
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
Oh boy, you just made this a very touch choice. Now I love three that I'll have to do eeny, meeny miney moe, or maybe I just won't vote. NOT. Good luck!
PP
Comment Written 01-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
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thanks, PP. love, jan
Comment from amada
Very funny lines and light story of Gwen and Mac. Very descriptive the adventures of those two mighty fun pups who like ice creams and telephones..
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
Very funny lines and light story of Gwen and Mac. Very descriptive the adventures of those two mighty fun pups who like ice creams and telephones..
Comment Written 01-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
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thanks, amada. love, jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
made me smile. made me laugh. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. still not sure what i am supposed to see here but i like this one. keep up the good work~
barbara
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
jan,
made me smile. made me laugh. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. still not sure what i am supposed to see here but i like this one. keep up the good work~
barbara
Comment Written 01-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
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barbara, I think you're supposed to see two verse sets of five lines each with each verse with the same rhyme pattern -- aaaaa/bbbbb -- if there are more verses, they are supposed to be two more per set -- that's all I know -- love, jan
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jan,
that makes sense. i might try it at some point. i always want to try new stuff but need to write the names down with the explanations. i know someone will want to know.
love,
barbara
Comment from D. Longo
Hi Rdfrdmom, dogs are truly a blessing. The little beasties make no bones about love, or trust, or treats . . . and don't complain about their jobs.
This form does seem to lend itself to pet poetry. :-) D.
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
Hi Rdfrdmom, dogs are truly a blessing. The little beasties make no bones about love, or trust, or treats . . . and don't complain about their jobs.
This form does seem to lend itself to pet poetry. :-) D.
Comment Written 01-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-May-2008
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thanks, D. Longo. love, jan
Comment from Judian James
How did I miss this Jan??? Anyway, the voting booth opens in a few days, so I thought I better take a look and was amazed I had not read this. It's charming. I loved it. These monoverses were kind of fun, don't you think?
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2008
How did I miss this Jan??? Anyway, the voting booth opens in a few days, so I thought I better take a look and was amazed I had not read this. It's charming. I loved it. These monoverses were kind of fun, don't you think?
Comment Written 28-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2008
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I loved it, actually, although I found them more involved than I thought they would be. May try my hand at another one in the future. thanks for stopping by, Judian. love, jan
Comment from Curt Mongold
This will not be an easy contest to judge! I like the length, the subject matter is interesting and tells the story well. A strong contender.
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2008
This will not be an easy contest to judge! I like the length, the subject matter is interesting and tells the story well. A strong contender.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 28-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2008
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thanks, Curt. Love, jan
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem very much. Reminds me of my two spoiled babies. They quickly become family members. Your poem describes their actions and loving nature beautifully. Thank you for sharing. Sorry to be reviewing so late but have had a bout of the flu. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2008
Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem very much. Reminds me of my two spoiled babies. They quickly become family members. Your poem describes their actions and loving nature beautifully. Thank you for sharing. Sorry to be reviewing so late but have had a bout of the flu. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 25-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2008
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mtngalofnc, sorry you've been ill. I'm battling sinus problems. feel better soon. thanks for the kind review. love, jan
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol Jan. I love dogs so of course I thought that this was a delightful piece of poetry in mini-monoverse style. Thanks for making me chuckle lol
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
Lol Jan. I love dogs so of course I thought that this was a delightful piece of poetry in mini-monoverse style. Thanks for making me chuckle lol
Comment Written 20-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
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you're quite welcome. these two are hoots, for sure. love, jan