Tornado descends
haiku inspired awesome power of nature43 total reviews
Comment from sherrymccall
This is such a short poem. It delivers the message of the destruction in few words. It is a heartbreaking fact that you vividly paint in our minds. The picture you chose goes well with your poem. Great job. Sherry
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2008
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This is such a short poem. It delivers the message of the destruction in few words. It is a heartbreaking fact that you vividly paint in our minds. The picture you chose goes well with your poem. Great job. Sherry
Comment Written 13-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2008
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thank you
Comment from Jonez08
Earthwriter talk about getting to the point. I was taken on a quick and powerful tour. Arrival, destruction and aftermath.
Less is more, is proven by this poem. Thanks
Cassandra
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2008
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Earthwriter talk about getting to the point. I was taken on a quick and powerful tour. Arrival, destruction and aftermath.
Less is more, is proven by this poem. Thanks
Cassandra
Comment Written 13-Apr-2008
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thank you so much
Comment from aviddbrut
very good haiku. who would have thought a haiku about a tornado could be written? but then haikus are often nature related... so I guess anything goes. good evocative poem.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2008
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very good haiku. who would have thought a haiku about a tornado could be written? but then haikus are often nature related... so I guess anything goes. good evocative poem.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2008
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thank you
