Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

Your words strike very close to home. You tell the story with fine wit and nice irony. I have some similar thoughts. I am happy you wrote this. All best wishes. Ray.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2008

Thanks Raymond, for your encouraging review and kind rating.
Glad you liked it.
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Pupa

Comment from mcdaniel1299

Excellent

That was an entertaining little poem that I can, unfortunately, relate to on a grand scale. My kids laugh at me on a daily basis because I forget all kinds of things. I enjoyed your poem, it flowed well and told a nice story. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2008

Hi mcdaniel, I used to laugh at myself too, but lately I am getting angry as it is worsening.
Thanks for your very encouraging review and kind rating.
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Pupa

Comment from Writerbychoice

Excellent

oh My ... This was awesome. You did a great job of describing all of us... So, many of us experience memory lapse...and can totally relate.
Great Job!

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2008

Well Writerbychoice, I didn't mean to include so many that have related already to my letter/poem. It seems we can't escape it.
Thanks for your most encouraging review and kind rating.
Love
Pupa