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The Raunchiest Poem Ever!

It is what it says.

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Comment from Treischel
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Alright you sucked me in to this clever little April Fools joke. Piqued by curiosity, I fell for your trap. Good one. Of course I had to try several times since I'm far from under age 18, although that was be a pleasant thought.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    I thank yoy very much for your review and tolerance too. Usually it is the underage family members that have to help out the adults in the household. Mike
Comment from carey
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Very clever, you fooled me for sure. I guess everyone who looked were either curious or have a dirty mind. Well done!
Carey

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    The first year I put this out, I had several little old ladies pissed at me. Love the review and thank you for it. Mike
Comment from Kiki12
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You just made me burst out laughing (after I checked to see if I was accidentally on my son's computer!) In that one clever little trick you managed to insert internal rhyme, alliteration, a perfect flow, and humor. Great April fool's joke! Worked like a charm:0)
Kiki

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    I despised that little click here to retry with my first computer that used DOS, it never worked once. I enjoyed this review and thank you for it and the compliments. Mike
Comment from adewpearl
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What a funny prank poem for April Fool's Day, Mike LOL
God bless anyone for suggesting I might be underage for anything. LOL Brooke

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2011


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    Human nature makes for the best humor. I can only think of how many cartoons I watched, aptly named Looney Tunes and later in life, found myself living them. I guess I didn't learn much. To me, this poem is an oldy but goodie and it sets my mind in working for next year. Thank you so very much for reviewing this and the flattering comments. Mike
Comment from Gary D. Hardy
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This has great flow and form and reads very well, nice color scheme too. And certainly the best practical joke I've read in a while. Wonder how many people have actuall hit the retry button,Lol! Great job!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2011


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    The best April Fools joke was played in elementary school where one teacher rubed the stair rails and every door knob wiht limburger cheese. The horrible thing was, he lauded, "The person who did it, for exposing human nature," because he got the biggest kick out of seeing us smell our hands to see if the smell went away. I tried to keep this poem in that vain. I thank you very much for your compliments and this review. When I origionally posted the poem, there were several complaints that I remove it because people kept clicking on it hoping it would work. Doh!
reply by Gary D. Hardy on 02-Apr-2011
    That is funny! And your welcome. But I must admit------I hit the retry button too. Lol!
Comment from missy98writer
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Mike K2,
excellent April Fools joke. You fooled me with your awesome title. I love it you even employed poetic alliteration. I wonder if any has tried to click here to retry? Thanks for make me a fool on April Fool's Day. I love it!
Melissa.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2011


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    When I first posted this poem, many people suggested that I remove the retry button, because they kept clicking it hoping it will work. There was even a comment it would about as good as the real version that Microsoft used. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
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well well, i almost skipped it, but you got me, and no one else has tried yet!!! very nicely done. i like the format and color of your text

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2011


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2011
    I love adult covers because often it will sit for quite a while and finally a brave soul will look and then other people come on board. Usually adult covered items, aren't of my taste, but I always at least check them out as I have found a few tantalizing gems. I thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from mariejames
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Silly you-this is so funny. You almost had me going for a minute. I like the title--that's great. Nice April Fools poem. Can you hear me laughing?

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. I heard...
Comment from Fish
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Well, that was the most asexual, non-violent,
least language-offensive thing I've ever read.
Good job! You get five lollipops! Fish

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2008
    That was what was raunchy about it! lol Thank you for your compliments and this review.
Comment from Norzah
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You got me there. Not that I care for raunchy staff but just to take up the dare to see how raunchy can you get. I see that more that a hundred reviews had been received - that show how manly the readers are how daring the female readers are. The man who doesn't respond to a raunchy stuff is either a man of Got or one who hasn't got. Lol.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2008


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2008
    I never hesitate to put myself out there, when it comes to adult covers, I always open them, but very often then not, I don't get to the review before I leave. A couple of poetess' do a remarkable job at balancing things and I enjoy reading them. I enjoyed the last comment. lol Thank you very much for your comments, compliments and this review.