Comment from shiriart

Excellent

What a magnificent piece of art. Not only is it well written but it is so beautifully laid out. This will look great on a handmade paper card.

I like that the punctuation is consistent with narration and not trying to stick to a theme.

Well done.

Shir

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2008

Comment from wizard_of_oz

Excellent

Very lovely presentation. I'm impressed with your creativity. I also like the message in every line, full of sincere wishes. The words are easy to read and understand. This is a new poetry format to me, thanks for sharing. Good luck to the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2008

Comment from Swtdreamz

Excellent

Oh which reminds me-
So many bdays this month!
My gift #1 to mother was a bouquet of Pink Passion flowers/roses along with a bear, chocolates, and balloons!
There's a Tiffany's anklet on the way and a Dior (pure poison) within this week-

Also send my best wishes to all involved!
These are a joyous occasions! :)

Very sweet, fluffy poem for heavenly guardians and the warmest of regards-

Swt

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2008